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You Thought Of Me

Updated on September 08, 2011

You thought of me,

I could feel it.

The tears down our cheeks,

Would seal it.

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You thought of me.

And, no-one knows.

And I can’t stop,

This love that grows.

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You thought of me.

The world has us apart.

And, no-one sees,

The broken heart.

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You thought of me.

Others will dispense it.

But my heart and eyes,

Could sense it.

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You thought of me.

Many will deny,

That I could feel you,

As you would cry.

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You thought of me,

From a world away.

And I’ll continue to love you,

To my dying day.

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You thought of me,

And I of you.

You thought of me,

And I cried too.

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~Micky Dee~

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      prettyunicorn 5 years ago from Charleston, SC

      Wow.

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      To think and reminisce in the memories of the beloved are something that every being indulges in but to admit to it, takes sheer strength.

      Beautifully crafted.

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      drbj and sherry 5 years ago from south Florida

      I do love your sweet side, Micky. On second thought, I do believe both of your sides are sweet. :)

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      mckbirdbks 5 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Nicely done Mickey.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Aw lovers torn apart, separated by oceans. So sad and emotioal.

      Want a tissue dear?

      Seriously this is simply beautiful and hesrt wrenching Micky. I loved it.

      voted up

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      PETER LUMETTA 5 years ago from KENAI, ALAKSA

      Sometimes we need to be soft and vulnerable, Beautiful Mick,

      Peter

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Beautiful poem.

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      Dr Anupma Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      What a beautiful love poem! in a few words, you express a lot. You depicts your feelings very well. It is true that only the lovers can feel the separation. Usually people say, everything will be alright very soon, certainly you will forget her/him. But it is very tough, in fact it is impossible. For some time it can remain in unconscious mind, but no one can forget it.

      Beautiful line. I vote it as awesome.

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      b. Malin 5 years ago

      How Beautiful and Sentimental Micky...It's such a touching Read.

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      Hummingbird5356 5 years ago

      A very beautiful poem Micky Dee.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Very beautiful Micky...

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      Mentalist acer 5 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Consciousness Grown,

      From A Reassuring Unknown.;)

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      Martie Coetser 5 years ago from South Africa

      It is wonderful to know we are in somebody's thoughts, and just as wonderful to have somebody special in our thoughts. Micky, you should write more poems like this :)))

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      2uesday 5 years ago

      Lovely poetry, very nice to read.

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      Amy Becherer 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Too beautiful for comment...stands on its own.

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      Freya Cesare 5 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      Oooooh.... This is mine! I wrote it in my mind and you stole it from me! (Oh, I wish! >.

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      Erica Sanchez 5 years ago from California

      This was very beautiful Micky Dee. I love the last verse especially.

      "You thought of me,

      And I of you.

      You thought of me,

      And I cried too."

      Thanks for sharing such a gift.

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Lady_Tenaz 5 years ago

      Oh how I have missed your poetry my friend....so beautiful!!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 5 years ago from Great Britain

      OOOOH! Micky.!! How beautiful. It seemed to come from the depths of your soul. Gorgeous.xxx

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow this is brilliant, truly lovely.

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      Pastor Dr. Carlotta Boles 5 years ago from BREAKOUT MINISTRIES, INC. KC

      WONDERFUL! I have missed you Mickey! God Bless you!!!

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      PADDYBOY60 5 years ago from Centreville Michigan

      Thanks, and that is all I can say right now.

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