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Updated on February 4, 2011

Lover's Embrace

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      I love to write about passion but I was skeptical about posting anything here that may seem a little too steamy. Even now, I will confess that I am holding back from really writing with words of passion. Don't get me wrong, everything I write is done in a tasteful manner but to describe that elegant kiss of lips so sure to perfectly fit mine....Still, I figured I better test the water first before jumping in and this poem is a fair start.

 

You have control

 

To dream of her is to feel the soft elegant smile of hope

She tethers my mind with golden strands of a rope

Her voice sits quietly, sighing peacefully at night

Daring my passionate longing to stand before her sight

 

Her eyes see the man that I truly am deep, inside

She is my everything with, no secrets shall I hide

Her lips poised to kiss me in a taunting allure

Beckoning me into her arms making my world, a blur

 

Gentle embracing with a her touch upon my skin

Looking in her eyes and falling in love, all over, again

Our lips tenderly embrace as she draws me near

Into a world of great hope left without any fear

 

Touch me gently and take me deep into the night

Kiss me softly beneath the faded pale, moonlight

Whisper your desires to stir up the fires of my soul

Passionately love me for, my love, you have control

 

I'm really going for my fellow hubber's opinion. If you think this may be inappropraite, please let me know and I will pull it. If not, I will begin writing mroe and more, passion-themed stories to apply here. Thank you in advance and once again, Happy New Year!

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      tnderhrt23 6 years ago

      I can only speak for myself, but I don't see anything inappropriate here! This is so elegantly, lovingly, romanically, emotionally full, just beautiful. This is the kind of gem any woman yearns for. Voted up and up!

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thank you again, tnderhrt23...I love to write about amore. I believe I will write a short story of passion and longing now that you've put my mind at ease.

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      Rhonda Musch 6 years ago from The Emerald Coast

      I voted it awesome. Your writing is beautiful. Not inappropriate. You have read some of my poems. They are steamy. I have never had a complaint from my readers. You want either. Your poems are ravishing. Keep on writing. We will keep on reading. Your fan and friend Rhonda.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thanks Rhonda, I appreciate your advice and am looking forward to posting more poems and short stories based on romance and passion, both of which, I long for and have felt.

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      Bel Marshall 6 years ago from Michigan

      Keep writing! There is a man in my life who is going to benefit GREATLY if I keep reading your stories! He says thank you. ;)

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thank You Bel...and please tell the Hubby I said, "You are most welcomed"! :-)

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      kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

      OK that was amazing

      Instafan

      weez gotzuz a new great writer

      Bravo and welcome

      Kimberly [prey and karma]

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thank you Kimberly...I am really grateful that you like my writing and please, fill free to read some of my other work when you have time.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      Very nicely written, you have a gift for romance which of course every woman loves.

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      Thank you Blondey...Romance is the best part of life to me...every little jesture, every little kind though and effort is what I live for and love to give.

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      Rosemary Amrhein 6 years ago from Boston, MA

      I feel the same way.

      Not too many people who I know who are that passionate..Have you met many?

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      Warren Keith Hayes 6 years ago from Bryson City, North Carolina

      HI Blondey...Maybe one of these days we will know to, is love real. What is love is another good question right up there with where can I find love and will I find love.

      Passionate and romantic people are a dying breed in this day and age. The world turns without us, anymore leaving us in another time.

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