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You in Me

Updated on April 22, 2013

So sexy in tight jeans you
bend to sniff to smell the
rose so red I sent you
this morning ,as fresh as dew my tears on
the petal lick it
off, the salt of my sufferings, and say:

You in me

We are cool now !

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      yes :)

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      Jose Velasquez 4 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I'm having a little trouble getting this one. How about a little help?

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      @ epigramman.Thanks so much for stopping by always and read one of my poetry .Your comments and encouragement mean a lot to me.

      Have a nice day!

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      Damn , now that's hot Sir James - I love the philosophical wisdom of your poetic writing - and this piece is just downright funky - you are speaking a languague of your very own - and it's special indeed.

      lake erie time 2:47pm listening to some afternoon jazz with a nice cuppa tea and sending a big hug from Colin and his cats

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Thanks Martin for input.It looks better with Jasmine,it rhymes.I will edit it in few days.

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Make it jasmine and you hit the spot.