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Intense - You Touch me With Your Words

Updated on November 8, 2018
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Shimmering Dawn is passionate about poetry, and she enjoys writing poetry, especially romantic poetry.

Intense - You Touch me With Your Words

Passionate words are heady and can sway you off your feet, words that blow your mind away and transport you into the clouds and among the stars. That is the power of thelanguage of love. What power does reason and logic have before them? Can they stand their ground or will emotions have their way? Words seem to wrap their way around your heart and break your every resolve. The power of words is amazing, the power of love is even more amazing. It is fascinating to recreate and luxuriate in words of love. The magic of love never seems to fade.. no matter how old or young you are..... come experience it .I would love to hear from you.. please let me know if it touched you in some way


Intense - A Poem

You touch me with your words,
Telling me of your love,
Filling my soul with music,
Forever and now!

You sing to me those songs,
Of fervent passion,
To hear them, my heart longs,
Singular words well chosen!

With a tender caress,
In its wings,
Your words express,
Sublime things!

A warmth so gentle,
Comes flooding in,
Stripping me of my resolve,
Turning me mushy within!

You charm me with your words,
In a deluge of intense feeling,
Profoundly aching inwards,
You captivate my being!

I see you mirrored in them,
As clear as glass, and plain
Words springing right out at me,
Driving me, completely insane!

Enticing words they are,
Enslaving delicately,
My mind is at war,
Should I surrender or flee?

What am I to do?
What am I to say?
Could I brush them away?
You have me in your sway!

© 2011 Dawn

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    • manatita44 profile image


      5 years ago from london

      I guess they made you shimmer, eh? Words can do this. I have written a piece simply called 'words.' and dedicated it to a Friend. Now I am looking for someone else's and found you. Pretty alluring and enthralling poetry. Great work, shimmering Dawn!

    • Brenda L Scully profile image

      Brenda Lorraine Scully 

      8 years ago from Ireland

      it has been too long since I read poetry here on hub pages, I have to say I am glad I chose to read this, well written indeed.

    • girishpuri profile image

      Girish puri 

      8 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      What am i to say ? touching...voted up.

    • shimmering Dawn profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago

      Wow that is splendid.. I have been reading about Haiku writing ... maybe I should try it.. You are truly an inspiration Haikutwinkle!! thank you.. you might soon see a Haiku on these pages... that is if I am here very soon.. :)

    • haikutwinkle profile image


      9 years ago

      What a masterpiece!


      a flower smiled, a butterfly arrived, a light touch

      a chattering bee, chuckling sunflower, happy tears

      hummingbirds meet, a garden of strings, breezy hearts

      intensely intense, tangle of tangos, ocean symphonies

      now or never, to embrace or not, carpe diem!


      I'm inspired!

    • shimmering Dawn profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago

      Rosemay, Gosh! that is simply perfect!! Thank you my dear :)

    • shimmering Dawn profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago

      LOL AE, mushy within is my falling... too mushy for any good.. :) Glad you think so :) Oh wow , it just strikes me that mushy is perfect indeed!! LOL

    • shimmering Dawn profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago

      Cloverleaf, that is a very expressive comment and I am impressed by it. Thank you for voting it up and for the comment :)

    • shimmering Dawn profile imageAUTHOR


      9 years ago

      Movie Master, thanks for the read and the endorsement. It is more important to hold on to the love that touched you and you my friend seem to be mastering the art. Thanks for the love :) Love has me in its sway!!

    • Rosemay50 profile image

      Rosemary Sadler 

      9 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      This is beautiful. I enjoyed it

    • always exploring profile image

      Ruby Jean Richert 

      9 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful! Mushy within is perfect. Thank you. Enjoyed...

    • Cloverleaf profile image


      9 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

      Hi Shimmering Dawn,

      What an excellent poem, I am so impressed by your use of powerful words to describe your passionate emotions.

      Voted up!


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      Movie Master 

      9 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hi Shimmering Dawn, The magic of love.. I count myself as being very fortunate to have been touched by love and still holding on to it!

      I love your poem and voting up!


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