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Poem: I suggest you Run!

Updated on February 10, 2012

You know that

Inside you are not

at all friendly

You know that you

Believe everything

revolves around

money and that

money always made

you feel that there’s

no need to be friendly

Money to you is

Simply everything.

You believe that

In some places

you visit sometimes

There is this need

for you to put on

this great pretend

And for that while

the thrill makes you

a person fulfilled

Someone that’s so

friendly you are taken

for this happy go lucky

Do you know that

happiness is one

of God’s greatest gifts

Caring and sharing

are some things

that will also always

come along with it.

But look carefully

at what happening.

Instead of you

Being the one

That epitome

of friendliness

you play one thing

on the outside

while you are just

about burnt up

on the inside

you live miserable

all for what?

Some Money!

You are always

in some evil rift

You came here

on vacation,

Now because you

were unfriendly

You refused a

great opportunity

already arranged

that you could

meet the lovely

people of this

beautiful place

you heard about

from so many others..

Unaware that those

same people whom

you refused to meet

embarrassing your

husband and kids.

it could easily be

those same people

who will be the ones

that will eventually

save your life,

Maybe also the life

of your children

the entire family.

You are only here

to steal some beauty

from their land,

Somehow you believe

them to be foolish

unable to see beauty

that they are blind

That they even cannot

truly understand !

Here you are caught

in this never before

seen by you and

Not even in your wildest

Dreams would you even

imagine yourself

being caught up

in such a monstrosity

Called a tsunami.

People were running

all possible directions

but you can't see

of even possibly hear

them say from what!

Beautiful weather

that made you say

on the very first day

of the trip ,why Not!

though somewhat hot

still your are not able

to see. But remember!

You were not there

To be friendly your

only interest was

to enjoy the beauty

and spend money.

Here now the people

are running saying

Life is sweeter than

your money Honey!

You are not friendly,

Can’t speak their

language lost opportunity

for love and kindness

that's an international

easy to translate

type of language

anywhere on earth.


You have not once

thought of practicing

human decency

All you ever thought

about was your

wretched money.

Your only clothes

were your swim suits

Your belongings

are all in the room

Even the people

in the hotel

Have left everything

they are gone

your husband went

far out to sea

Here you are with

your kids, afraid,

Still standing on

the beautiful black sand

what was just a minute

ago bright and sunny

Have all of a sudden

become dark mysterious,

nothing funny because

now you can see,

Why everyone’s running

it was not far away almost.

already hear with you

you never expected

this monstrous Tsunami,

you are not friendly

Remember no one

needs your money.

So what are you

going to do now that

this huge monster

Have reached that

much closer to you.

I suggest you Run!


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    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      As always thanks Rose. And life will, because you are not spreading good will . This life and I have see it , has it's own way of showing you things and giving you your fair share of warnings . Many believe in money , the dictionary describes it as a medium through which exchange takes place.

      But there are those who without money are simply bent on pretense, and life has it's way of dealing with them also.

      I am so proud of my mother that in my adult life all I se are her teachings each and every day, and I am so happy that she is still alive to see what her truthful words have done.

      Flee from hate mischief and jealousy , don't bury your thoughts , put your vision to reality. That's what life is about .

      Ther4e are certain thing that people will and won't do but those that believe, God guides their way and there are things they simply would never do.

      When your human mind starts to lean on the negative ,the good in you easily does what it's supposed to do you are guided.

      God is Great!

      Walk good and stay in the light.


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Don't think that because you have money you're above all the rest and the king of the hill. Disaster and misfortune will even find you. The simplest and most pleasurable things in life are free.

    • Sky9106 profile image

      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks the lyricwriter. When the story behind the poem gets some recognition , before their final resting place , that's means it's understood . There resting place will be the reason I came here , to Hp.

      I thank you very much.


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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      And you are so? whatever the best word one can get to say, appreciated, and by me you are by me. Ok , here is what this is to show you that it is simple.

      I will share with you and you will understand a little more.

      This is a story I will write later. It's about a selfish wife , with a very offensive personality. Her husband is always having these quarrels with her, telling her that what goes around comes around again , and the same people she met on the way going up, are going to be the same ones she meets on the way down.

      And here she is , caught up in the middle of this mess, her ways have her not asking the people ,what was going on ? But when it was almost too late , she will start regretting , her husband was far away , knowing that they are in trouble , he was out to sea and they felt the tsunami as it head for the shore. She was stuck in only her bathing suit with her two children.

      Just figure out a rich lady who cares about nothing but herself. That's one of the reason I need you to read my friends book well here he is speaking.

      Take a look see if you understand, what he is saying.

      Stay well my dear lady poetvix.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 6 years ago from West Virginia

      Up, useful, awesome, and interesting votes Sky. I will say it, Tsunami of words, literally. Awesome poem and everything fits like a glove. I love all the emotion involved. It makes for a great poem.

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      poetvix 6 years ago from Gone from Texas but still in the south. Surrounded by God's country.

      There is a tidal wave coming for the world but I don't think any can outrun it though most of us will try. Sky, I find your stuff hard to understand sometimes for I tend to over complicate things. When I get to the heart of it, its purity is beautiful. Ultimately all any of us have is the love for one another and for our maker, every thing else is just window dressing. Without the love, the rest only allows for the buying of the most expensive type of misery.

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      Sky9106 6 years ago from A beautiful place on earth.

      Thanks you brethren Frank. Always a welcome note sitting at this door.

      I really would have preferred you saying a Tsunami but I am not you and that 's what make you , You!

      A tidal wave of words just to remember a selfish, and unfriendly woman putting her children at risk , because of her selfishness. That's why I had asked those? The other day , that I hope that their plane don't crash in a place where the language is different.

      That's all I have to remember later , I told you I leave time to grow.

      Bless my brethren.

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 6 years ago from Shelton

      what a tidal wave of words.. a great hub Sky.. and I am running :) LOL Great share


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