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Your Beating Heart

Updated on January 9, 2013

I heard your heart beating,
as I slowly walked away
you could not find the words...
that you wanted so... to say

my soul was crying loudly,
as tears ran down... my face
it was just the two of us together,
in this sudden moment... in space

The quiet moments were beating,
like the pounding... of a drum
the blood pulsing through your veins,
all I could hear was a steady hum

My mind was racing,
I could not turn back
our love was left hanging...
like a coat on a single rack

Although it was wrong,
it was right try to find
I had to leave for good..
though my soul... I left behind


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    • cleaner3 profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you teaches. for the kind comments.

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      Dianna Mendez 

      5 years ago

      Some times when you can hear that beating heart, it makes it hard to walk away. Lovely poem and very touching.

    • cleaner3 profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Eddi, you are the best

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      5 years ago from Wales

      Truly wonderful Michael;you are indeed so very talented and here's to so many more hubs for us both to share on here.

      Have a great day.


    • cleaner3 profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ hatter , thanks for the comment.

      @Chris, thanks for your comment .. liked your dark poem . it was cool

      @ Nikki, glad to hear you got something out of it . It seems like everyone feels something different to relate to . waitng for you to finish that story.!

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      Nikki Wicked 

      5 years ago from Louisiana

      aww so sad. The words of a dying man to his lover he left behind, at least thats what i got out of it. Beautiful and tragic.

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      5 years ago

      Very good Michael, it set the scene in a very loving and concise way. Applauds to you. Regards................. Chris

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      Martin Kloess 

      5 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for sharing something very personal.

    • cleaner3 profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you James for a creative comment . I will survive.!

    • cleaner3 profile imageAUTHOR


      5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      theacerbic1, thank you for the comment.

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      Tijani Achamlal 

      5 years ago from Morocco

      Very beautiful and awesome.Thanks for sharing .

      To fall in love is awfully simple, but to fall out of love is simply awful.I know the feeling,hang in there my friend.Everything is gonna be fine,I am sure,just give it time.


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      5 years ago from Florida

      Powerful. I have felt these same emotions before and you put it together well.


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