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Your Mood (poem)
In the blessing of your mood
Lavishes your eyes exude
Fantasies my mind preclude
Paradise I can’t elude
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Fascination there was strewed
In the fullness of your mood
Even time could not delude
Feelings which a heart imbued
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Hopes and wonders were renewed
Dream which passions had accrued
In the richness of your mood
All my searches there conclude
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Caught within a veil of fire
Set ablaze by lost desire
Every breath I took was dire
Skies of you I now aspire
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All that patter I elude
Worthless fashions once so spewed
For a truth my soul had viewed
In the stillness of your mood
Comments
Definitely improved my mood ;) As always you leave us with lots to think about.
Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.
VERY nicely done. This was a great pleasure to real, flowing so well.
Your poems are always so epic! This was very romantic and beautiful.
This was such a pleasure to read..beautiful words to ponder. Thank you Martin. You are a true poet my friend.
Awesome Verses! What a pleasant surprise.
Great imagery and however did you find all those rhymes? You did it so well.
Faith said it so well. I, too love the imagery and music adding to the mood.
Kim
Beautiful. For eyes to elicit such love and passion is awesome.
A beautiful photo with the mod explains it all such great words of expression
Whew, Mh, now that is one good mood there! When I read your title initially, I thought it was going to be a limerick about the other not so good kind of mood. : )
Love the imagery, music and video ... all certainly adding to "the mood."
Up and more .... sharing too
God bless, Faith Reaper
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