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Your Mood (poem)

Updated on September 3, 2013

In the blessing of your mood

Lavishes your eyes exude

Fantasies my mind preclude

Paradise I can’t elude


Fascination there was strewed

In the fullness of your mood

Even time could not delude

Feelings which a heart imbued


Hopes and wonders were renewed

Dream which passions had accrued

In the richness of your mood

All my searches there conclude


Caught within a veil of fire

Set ablaze by lost desire

Every breath I took was dire

Skies of you I now aspire


All that patter I elude

Worthless fashions once so spewed

For a truth my soul had viewed

In the stillness of your mood


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    • tillsontitan profile image

      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Definitely improved my mood ;) As always you leave us with lots to think about.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      VERY nicely done. This was a great pleasure to real, flowing so well.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Your poems are always so epic! This was very romantic and beautiful.

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This was such a pleasure to read..beautiful words to ponder. Thank you Martin. You are a true poet my friend.

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      Dora Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      Awesome Verses! What a pleasant surprise.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Great imagery and however did you find all those rhymes? You did it so well.

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Faith said it so well. I, too love the imagery and music adding to the mood.


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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      Beautiful. For eyes to elicit such love and passion is awesome.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A beautiful photo with the mod explains it all such great words of expression

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Whew, Mh, now that is one good mood there! When I read your title initially, I thought it was going to be a limerick about the other not so good kind of mood. : )

      Love the imagery, music and video ... all certainly adding to "the mood."

      Up and more .... sharing too

      God bless, Faith Reaper