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Your Time (poem)

Updated on June 20, 2012

Here is your time this moment meant for you

To touch the world and show it who you are

A peaceful scent perhaps a shooting star

A destiny now opens to your view

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Yours is the voice heard calling from afar

A whispered sigh perhaps a windswept coup

I’m here oh world now watch what I can do

It’s time to bring your fashion to bazaar

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And days to minutes join the passing stream

To hide in caverns shaded from the sun

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A misty shadow comes to claim this dream

And though you fight you know it has begun

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As you awake to world with strange new gleam

Here is your time enjoy what you have done

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      Michele Travis 5 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      This is an interesting poem. When you awake...it makes me feel like you are stronger, that is good. Loved it. Had to vote up.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. It captures and holds you.

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      myownlife 5 years ago from london

      Awesome, Great job

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I'm not much on poetry; in fact, I only read the poetry of maybe five hubbers on a regular basis. Note: I read yours. That should tell you how I feel about your work.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      I so much loved this line. "To touch the world and show it who you are."

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Mh, can I just say I love your ability to use videos?!

      Great poem! :)

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      You showed the world who you are and that is a fabulous poet. Amazing poem!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Loved it. Love your play on words..Cheers

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Hatter - Voting up across the board on this.

      I think it may just be one of my favorites.

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      LikaMarie 5 years ago

      I liked the imagery. :)

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This reminds me of days of old, when handmade colors adorn the walls of caves. We can still smell the smoke from the cooking fires, and a few bones are still left as remnants in the sandy soil. Bravo! Voted awesome and up!

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      Crystal Tatum 5 years ago from Georgia

      Oh, this is lovely! Very uplifting. Voted up

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      This is beautiful piece of poetry...

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      lovely masterpiece!

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      snowdrops 5 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      very wonderful! voted all!

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      Anoop Aravind A 5 years ago from Nilambur, Kerala, India

      Great lines...

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 5 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Simply beautiful poetry, so very well done. Voting up

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      A.E. Williams 5 years ago from Hampton, GA

      I like the idea of coming out into the world and gaining new experiences. Very cool writing, friend. It was a pleasure reading it!

      -Aubrey

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      ignugent17 4 years ago

      Very interesting " As you awake to world with strange new gleam" .

      Voted up and more!

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