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Zip-zaps!

Updated on October 6, 2014
  • Hedonic attitude

gives one

the epicurean thrill

of living!


  • Bush whacking

my way

through

the wooden-heads

envisioned I

my way

to victory!


  • Rudely

breaks open

a tiny chick,

its shell,

that protects it!

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      Nellieanna Hay 3 years ago from TEXAS

      Seems short of hedonic or epicurean, leaving a slightly bitter taste.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Sounds like that egg needed to be cracked sooner, if it was to satisfy an epicurean thrill.

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      sujaya venkatesh 3 years ago

      tnx jo n nel

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      Harish Mamgain 2 years ago from India

      sujaya, the pulse of life offers so much to feel around, both good and bad. You tell so much succinctly. I'm amazed, my friend. Wonderful craft ! Voted up and shared.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx hari

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