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A Drop of Tear…..

Updated on July 11, 2012
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A drop of tear .....!

A drop of tear is crying…
It feels helpless,
As nobody cares it…
It feels worthless.

It is shouting with anger…
For it has none talking,
It is frustrating to see….
How it resumes sulking.

It cries for its own life…every time it is born,
It senses the loath…every instant it is thrown.
It prefers its death… every point it is dead,
It feels the burnt of life…every while it is shed.

The drop of tear
Gets all ditched,
For the mistakes
It never commits.

Oh my little one….
Come to me….!
U r precious,
I promise you….
For I shall always love you.

The drop of tear… is the lone company I have,
Memory of moment spent with it…. I gonna’ save.

Cos I understand the burden of living,
Cos nobody bothers to sense my being.

Two lonely souls…now happy together,
The drop of tear also cries with laughter.

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      IntegrityYes 4 years ago

      WHOA! That is so great. I definitely voted up.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you Integrity for your kind votes and precious comment here. Hope you saw my comments on your post also.

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      Mike Pugh 4 years ago from New York City

      Very dark emotional poetry here, I dig it indeed, thanks dghbrh for sharing it.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      ohhhh..this one is awesome.dark but really great.

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      Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

      I'm loving this poem! I'm glad you posted this one.

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Dghbrh

      "The drop of tear

      Gets all ditched,

      For the mistakes

      It never commit"

      This reminds me of wasted tears that should have not been shed.

      The imagery in your words is amazing.

      Voted up and away

      Take care :)

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      IntegrityYes 4 years ago

      She is doing well.

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      snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      very well written!

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      A very deep poem dghbrh. Loved reading it.

      Voted up & awesome.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear CloudExplorer....its my pleasure to share it and yes....indeed this is one of my fav poem.....i took much time to write it though...but closest to my heart.......your comment is so much precious for me. Thank you friend:-)

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      Thank you@ Spy.....for your precious visit here. It feels great to know that you have found it to be great, my friend:-)

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      Thank you@ Ryen......for your kind visit here and valuable comment. Its my pleasure to post it here actually.

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      Thank you @Sueswan....yeah it strue tears we shed and we hate without any reason ....as they are always being hated without any fault of their own. Thanks again for your kind vote.

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      Thank you @Integrity...for you are very kind.

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      Thank you @ snowdrops for your comment here.

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      Thank you @ Rajan jolly for your kind visit, comment and votes here. Its much appreciated.

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      Mystique1957 4 years ago from Caracas-Venezuela

      I haven´t written a hub in quite a long time since I´ve focused the past 9 months on writing prose, free verse and rhyme...I´ve the feelers fresh...I read probably about 30 to 50 poems a week, from different people, different countries... I Like the personification of the teardrop...It has deep implications...Good write...

      Keep Bleeding that Ink...

      Al

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @Mystique1957.....its nice to know about you. I will sure try to bleed that ink in coming times....you are most welcome to read my other hubs as well and your precious comment is always welcome here.

      Thanks for your visit.

      Deergha

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      Oh my little one….

      Come to me….!

      U r precious,

      I promise you….

      For I shall always love you.

      beautiful, emotionally flowing words. ..Yes, those who live with tears, care them well for being their treasure.

      well done Deergha, really a marvelous poem !

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you dear friend, its much appreciated that you liked it.

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      Girish puri 4 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Deergha, this one is deep, emotional and touches my heart, voted up.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @girishpuri

      For your comment and voteds here. Its much appreciated always. God bless you

      deergha

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      anglnwu 4 years ago

      Tears, how we need them to help us cope with life's defeats. Lovely.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Many thanks for your comment here. Take care and God bless you

      deergha

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      Rayne123 4 years ago

      beautiful really nice

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you very much again. I am honored really. God bless you

      deergha

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      This is amazing Deegha! Very poignant, so true!

      Voted up and beautiful.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@Rajan...for making your time to comment here. Its much appreciated always. Thanks again.

      Deergha

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      ahorseback 3 years ago

      Unbelievably awesome !......I can taste the tears !

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Never mind .....better you should run for a cuppa strong tea i believe dear Ed..........ha ha ha. Thanks for taking your time off to taste little bit of teary hub this time. So tea is brewing i hope...Enjoy and feel afresh

      God bless you

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      Oh how I love this poem! Absolutely beautifully done. Thank you!

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@vocalcoach.......for you liked the poem. God bless you

      deergha

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      Aisha Jilani 3 years ago from Lahore

      Very deep piece of writing, a single tear truly has a deep reason behind it ... voted up... :)

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear Aisha, Many thanks for making your time to read this and comment here. Your votes are also much appreciate for.

      God bless you

      deergha

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      passionate77 3 years ago

      very nice and heart touching lines, so so nice sharing. each and every word sooo true, great work, thanks for sharing Deegrah!

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      Audrey Hunt 3 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      I like this poem so much I had to hurry back and read it again, Voted up, beautiful and sharing, Thank you ~ Audrey

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      passionate77............many thanks and glad that you like this one here. Take care and God bless you

      deergha

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      vocalcoach.....many thanks for liking this work of mine. your votes, shares and view all are much appreciated always. God bless you always

      deergha

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      Cat 3 years ago from New York

      dghbrh,

      This is amazing! I know it; sometimes it seems that my tear is my only friend... but it is also proof that I am still alive because it is my heart speaking out and providing evidence of its existence. Tears can be a sign of hurt, but they also come at moments of great pleasure too! Laughter is the best medicine and I'll take happy tears any day!

      Excellent!

      Up and more ~ Sharing too!

      Cat

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      deergha 3 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you for your heartfelt comment here, My dear new friend........Cat:-)

      Take care and hope you have a great day ahead.

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      Jackie Lynnley 2 years ago from The Beautiful South

      I missed this; very original and very good. ^

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      Girish puri 2 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Very well written

      God bless

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      @Jackie Lynnley

      @girishpuri

      Many thanks for your kind words here. Glad that you liked this one

      God bless both of you always

      deergha

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Hi dghbrh,

      I had to check your poetry after reading Faith Reaper's wonderful hub. This is a beautiful and touching poem. Voted up.

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      deergha 2 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@Jodah....your view, visit and votes all are much appreciated here. Faith is a dear friend always and I am always grateful to her in more them many ways sure.

      Take care and Stay blessed

      deergha

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