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A Girl named Autumn

Updated on February 25, 2013

Colours for the seasons....bright & alive...

Thoughts of " Autumn " and her " off Spring"
Thoughts of " Autumn " and her " off Spring"

seasons change as do people...


A girl named Autumn…. walks quietly into the room….

Yet no one sees her there..

She has a certain presence, still …

and her perfume fills the air..

Yet no one speaks to her…

Her colours are not light, but bright…

.reds, yellows and orange, quite a sight…

But even though , she’s more than that…

No one approaches, some don’t seem to care..

so she quietly leaves ..before the trees are bare

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      snowdrops 4 years ago from The Second Star to the Right

      Ohhhhh marvellous..ohhh such a beautiful poetry for Autumn!

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Voted up awesome! I visualized this poem in my mind.

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      Cynthia B Turner 4 years ago from Georgia

      This has such a beautiful, airy quality to it, like fine lace or the pattern work of bare branches in trees.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      snowdrops..lovedoctor926..Cyndi10..thank you for your comments..I am glad you enjoyed it..now how do I get this out so more will read it?

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      I will share it kj force.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      I love this poetry KJ. Autumn is beautiful and silent.. I wished I'd see Autumn in my life, those orange leaves falling while saying goodnight to the coming winter. :)

      Shared!

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Thank you lovedoctor956..much appreciated....

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Thanks unknownspy..your comments are deeply appreciated...it means alot when Hubbers like yourself enjoy my writes....

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      UrsulaRose 4 years ago

      What an inspirational poem you have written kjforce about the colourful season that is Autumn.

      In my patch of the planet we have just left Autumn behind for another year although there still are glimpses of autumnal tones present.

      This is a hub worthy of sharing. :)

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      UrsulaRose..thank you for your comment...Autumn if nothing else is the most colourful season of all..and the smells that accompany it are memorable...have a great day and welcome to my world of words....

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      Lot Rillera 4 years ago from Philippines

      beautiful poem KJF. I also wrote "autumn" leaves in my hub ! beautiful and shared !

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      Sid Kemp 4 years ago from Boca Raton, Florida (near Miami and Palm Beach)

      Lovely - your verse can make us all aware, so we see her enter, see her beauty, say good-bye when she leaves.

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      Vimesh Ummer.U 4 years ago from india

      autumn, really a good meaningful and beautiful poem.autumn can compare with two things the weather and the evening of life.in both the way it is meaningful.

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Thank you Lot Rillera..SidKemp..vimsoo3...glad you enjoyed ..and you all found the inner meaning..kudos...your comments are appreciated....

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      now this is something really so beautiful....autumn is painted in vivid color in your poem KJF...voted up and shared.......:-)

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      dghbrh...welcome and thank you for your comment..it thrills me when followers like and enjoy my poems,stories,articles,HUBS....thanks for the vote up and share...

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Such a beautifully written Hub a good time of year for me

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      kjforce 4 years ago from Florida

      Yep ! I too like to " Fall " into and " Spring " into...thanks for visiting and commenting...

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      Jose Velasquez 3 years ago from Lodi, New Jersey

      I like autumn. The chill in the air keeps people inside, so I can walk the streets feeling like the world belongs to me for a few moments.

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      kjforce 3 years ago from Florida

      PHILLYDREAMER....OMG..sounds like a song ..." king of the road "

      Autumn is quite a girl unlike her cousin " Seedy side of Spring "..have you read the poem ? Thanks for visiting my poem...

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