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I love U

Updated on September 11, 2016

I love you

I know you didn't mean to give me that black eye,

I will never burn your food again, I swear

Next time it will be perfect

I know you will never do it again

I love you

I am sorry I made you pull my hair

My mouth is just too big sometimes,

I shouldn't talk so much

I will try to be a little less outspoken

I love you

I know your right I don't need friends,

I just need you

You are my everything

I will stop talking to them, I promise dear

I love you

I am sorry I made you do it again,

I made you hurt me bad this time

Not sure what I did

I know it's all my fault though

I love you

I know it was an accident

You put that gun to my temple and pulled that trigger

It is alright though you covered it up good

Nobody will ever know you killed me

by the way, I still love you


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    • sweethearts2 profile image

      sweethearts2 5 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      I agree with all previous comments-this happens. It's great hub and a so sad reality. Love of self helps to prevent one from getting into these abusive relationships, avoiding the death of self.

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      jstelletello 6 years ago

      What is strikingly scary is that this could be real. You really captured the message!

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      January Moon 6 years ago from NY, Now Living in Atlanta Ga

      Great eye opener for women who are in domestic violent relationships, I think the question your asking here is, Is loving him to deeply worth my life, and the answer is NO, Never, great hub!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Very interesting hub, but I wish she'd stop apologizing so much. It's okay to be human and less than perfect too. Love means one person accepting the other person, even their faults. Too many rules here, I wonder?

      Someone loves being very possessive...and some will do almost anything to stay in a good relationship...

      Take care.

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      neakin 6 years ago

      It is beautifully written! Unfortunately, I have been that girl once before. The more I stayed the worse things became until one day I realized that it was not me it was him and he did not deserve me. Thanks for sharing! Voted up!

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      Martie Coetser 6 years ago from South Africa

      Oh my goodness! Only a woman who does not love herself will allow a man to do this to her. I can imagine myself in the shoes of such a woman, and I can understand her desperate and deep-felt love, but ohhhh, she has to save herself... learn to love herself in spite of all the reasons why she should not. This poem really touched my heart. I wish I could save all women who allow men to kill them emotionally or physically. And I wish men who do this to women come to their senses. Obviously they, too, hate themselves. Voted up and awesome!