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I love U
I love you
I know you didn't mean to give me that black eye,
I will never burn your food again, I swear
Next time it will be perfect
I know you will never do it again
I love you
I am sorry I made you pull my hair
My mouth is just too big sometimes,
I shouldn't talk so much
I will try to be a little less outspoken
I love you
I know your right I don't need friends,
I just need you
You are my everything
I will stop talking to them, I promise dear
I love you
I am sorry I made you do it again,
I made you hurt me bad this time
Not sure what I did
I know it's all my fault though
I love you
I know it was an accident
You put that gun to my temple and pulled that trigger
It is alright though you covered it up good
Nobody will ever know you killed me
by the way, I still love you
Comments
I agree with all previous comments-this happens. It's great hub and a so sad reality. Love of self helps to prevent one from getting into these abusive relationships, avoiding the death of self.
What is strikingly scary is that this could be real. You really captured the message!
Great eye opener for women who are in domestic violent relationships, I think the question your asking here is, Is loving him to deeply worth my life, and the answer is NO, Never, great hub!
Very interesting hub, but I wish she'd stop apologizing so much. It's okay to be human and less than perfect too. Love means one person accepting the other person, even their faults. Too many rules here, I wonder?
Someone loves being very possessive...and some will do almost anything to stay in a good relationship...
Take care.
It is beautifully written! Unfortunately, I have been that girl once before. The more I stayed the worse things became until one day I realized that it was not me it was him and he did not deserve me. Thanks for sharing! Voted up!
Oh my goodness! Only a woman who does not love herself will allow a man to do this to her. I can imagine myself in the shoes of such a woman, and I can understand her desperate and deep-felt love, but ohhhh, she has to save herself... learn to love herself in spite of all the reasons why she should not. This poem really touched my heart. I wish I could save all women who allow men to kill them emotionally or physically. And I wish men who do this to women come to their senses. Obviously they, too, hate themselves. Voted up and awesome!
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