Thunderkeys, I don't know how. But if you find out, let me know. In the meantime, I'll take a look at your stuff and let you know what I think, and you are welcome to base your opinion of my opinion on what I've written. And may I also say that while I understand your concern regarding clinical jargon, I think most people are pretty good at figuring things out. If not, they can google it. Your professional vocabulary will lend credence to your material. Don't be too willing to throw it by the wayside.
Also, I have no idea what extreme hub makeover is, but I'm betting it's a content generator. I'm not one of those who hope to make money hubbing randomly generated content. I'm all about the fiction. You can't fake that.
Good luck to you.