i wrote some stories that i want to be criticized, which is why i joined hubpages in the first place
sort by best latest
there's not much to criticize about your story, I like it a lot.
You can help the HubPages community highlight top quality content by ranking this answer up or down.
comment at other hubpages, they will comment to your hubpages too
Asking and answering questions is a good way to get noticed. :)
Where are they? I'll take a look. No guarantees.
Copyright © 2017 HubPages Inc. and respective owners. Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners. HubPages® is a registered Service Mark of HubPages, Inc. HubPages and Hubbers (authors) may earn revenue on this page based on affiliate relationships and advertisements with partners including Amazon, Google, and others.
Copyright © 2017 HubPages Inc. and respective owners.