Help! I wrote a fantasy/new-age story and I need general feedback from someone that likes Fantasy. It is a DRAFT (meaning that I expect to do re-writes,edits). It is a short and easy read. Let me know if you may be interested in giving feedback and I will send you the link to my Blog of DRAFT chapters. I intend to get a paid professional to give me detailed feedback but first I want some general feedback for preliminary "tweaking". If reading the story is not of interest to you, any suggestions that you have for a writer at this stage will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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Who are you writing the novel for? If it is to be published, getting feedback to be able to improve your writing is very important to developing a great story others will want to enjoy. I am glad you are interested in improving the story telling
I would love to have a publisher. The difficulty is getting one. Publishers/Agents won't work with someone that has not previously been published unless they are a celebrity. My plan is to self-edit and then to try to get my story "noticed".
I rec'd your suggestions. Thank you!! I replied to your comment on WordPress. I was wondering if you had a suggestion for how to accomplish describing Michelle's appearance given that the she is first introduced by way of a memory.
lol good question ! i think the vague desription suits the purpose ..
Not knowing everything but reading Chapter 5, I found Michelle was in a meadow.
Thus this suggestion.
It is a beautiful day in Nosos world, The bright warm sun is shining down on Michelle as she sat on the grassy knoll of the meadow deep in thought.
Many Thanks!! My Blog is http://worldlucid.wordpress.com/. The Blog describes the type of feedback I'm seeking. Chapters open as PDF. The PDFs can be opened in iBooks if you want to read on an iPad. Really looking forward to your feedback!
Hi.. I have completed suggestions for the first page of your prologue.. please email me @ email@example.com so that I can send suggestions to you via email.