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he looked a fool. That is a good start to a poem.
You are thinking in the theme of marriages... hmmm... I like it!
This is something that could easily turn into a story book.
not funny? :-)
The blue mule stood beside the trailer trash,
then realized how great it was to be an ASS!
Gee, I wondered if my little poem wasn't a little much for the audience, but I'm sure your addition will help tremendously! Thanks Insane Mundane ;-)
Oh, dear, what do I say? ...To hell with that... *hugs* ...Nothing blue over here! Shhhhhwing!
Awww... you don't want this poor mule to suffocate to death! Oh man!
This is deep. You should share this with those who are depressed. It speaks well.
Ah! So you are the blue mule MarieAlana1 is talking about!! ;-) ;-0
Hmm, multiple streams of interpretation - I was thinking of myself as the fool.
I know... I just looked at the brighter side... :-)
Bright blue, is that! Cerulean! Cobalt! Bring it on!
Sid - you are too modest.
Good poem! I like how they cheered each other up!
"So, they could feel all good.
and live in the hood."
but instead he stood, thought, and ate a lime.
Oh, poor tears that came with that tide.
ooohhh.... this is eery!
I like it! Did you see that the car question was written right after I wrote this?
Then, there was a tick-tock.
This is something I might be able to use with a story of the true Bob Evans.
This is a great symbolic legacy of your faith towards the United States.
Don't let the bed bugs bite.
The blue mule is out of sight.
This is cute! It is a show up in between the ox and the blue mule.
This could be used to make a Charlotte's Web type of poem.
For all that we can tell
until another animal rang the bell.
This is good! Yeah, you don't want to be cruel to the mule. So, you better follow the rule.
lol.... I like it.
They are going out on an adventure now.
the milk delivery man came and gave his some that was silk.