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Can someone critique/edit my poem? Feel free to add or change it however you choose.


Love like a rose. My heart was broken, cold & colored blue. I'd nearly given up on things I thought I knew. One day I found a rose, like a rose my heart grew. I'd walk threw every thorn, there is nothing I wouldn't do. Slowly pull that rose close, its all that gets me through. Every second on I knew my love was true. There will never be a day that passes when I'm not in love with you.

 

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