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Help, I want to improve my short story. Can anyone help me please?


Can someone read my short story. Death under the Harvest moon. I am trying to improve it and need help. I am a bit rusty, lol.

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Best Answer Alan R Lancaster (alancaster149) says

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11 months ago
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    Terrie Lynn (Terrielynn1) 11 months ago

    Thank you. One problem is the grammar. Work count really wasnt my issue. And punctuation help. I guess I wasn't specific enough.


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Omar Eldamsheety says

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11 months ago
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    Terrie Lynn (Terrielynn1) 11 months ago

    Ok, thank you. My story is only around the recommend minimum amount of words for a short story. I was hoping for more technical help.