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body rush

Updated on April 19, 2017

i absorbed you last night

soaked you into my skin

you were more than just invited...

you were already in

when the breath was taken from me

while kissed from you so sweet

the world dissolved around me

and i couldn't feel my feet

to pull my lips from yours

and be drawn right back again

i could have kissed you into forever

forever felt you touch my sins.

rocked inside a cradle

hot breath inside of rain

what made me get the loudest

was the way you touched my pain

similar in circumsance

thoughtfulness in deed

no one else could know the hell i've handled

or the maddness that ive seen.

endless need

turned into greed

i crave the taste of you

once hallowed out

but now is filled

with vivid dreams of you.

flashed before me pieces

of tastes and cries and fire

the body rush consumes me

after-shocks of my desire.

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      Hawkeye 4 years ago

      The way hearts feel when they touch is an amazing moment lost in time. Forever yours forever mine. Beautiful.

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      the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Ever lingering in my skin pleasure pulses deep within. Its you i see when i close my eyes, its you i feel in the wake of the night.

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      Hawkeye 4 years ago

      To stay with you from evening night till morning light

      Nothing has ever felt this truly right.

      From the taste of you lips to the feel of your hair as I touch your skin.

      Fate has made me the luckiest since your heart has let me in.

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      Nikkij504gurl 4 years ago from Louisiana

      I am speechless

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      the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Lol. I was too today

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      Jason l Davis 4 years ago from Zip City, Alabama

      I am in love with your writing. The way you use you words to paint the pictures and bring out all the emotion that you are "feeling" or "freeing"....Either way you are a great , love it...jld

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      the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Davis!!! i am three shades of pink right now. really, u like my stuff? im so excited! lol

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      So beautiful, so passionate, wow, love it, every word of it!

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      the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      doing both bama, doin both

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      CM Sullivan 4 years ago from California

      Reading this with "Tonight" playing was so totally the way to read it. The symphony blended with your words. I loved it.

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      the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      i know, i wrote this and was thinking hmm, what would be a great song to put on here, and this was it.

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      ..well it's just a rush of excitement Miss Steph of Shakespeare to see how you have developed and matured as a world class writer in all genres, styles and moods over the past two years - hubbravo to you and say hello to the little general for me - sending you warm wishes and good thoughts from lake erie time 12:49pm

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      the pink umbrella 4 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      awe, thanks eppi!!!!!!

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