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Poem: Bomb of Emotions- Let it Explode!

Updated on October 4, 2016

Everyone has its own idea of being perfect…

Everyone dreams it,

Everyone wants it,

Everyone works hard for it.

We tried everything to achieve it.

We always pretend that everything’s ok… alright!

We hide our own feelings and emotions.

We always in a shadow, scared to show the real us.

Just to look good in every sight that we got.

Whatta life!

Now you…look at you.

Full of secrets and sacrifices,

Full of masks and darkness.

Hey! C’mon guys, wake up!

Come to think of it

Have a break!

Yeah it is good to be perfect in every aspect,

However look at you now.

You have always thinking of so many things day ‘til night-

Without peacefulness in you.

Your heart is crying night to dawn,

Your mind is bleeding in vain.

Hey! C’mon guys!

Don’t pretend that you’re happy,

Don’t pretend that there’s no weaknesses in you,

Coz the whole you is in pain.

C’mon guys! Have a break!

Let your craziness get out this time.

Just give it a try, be yourself this minute.

If you wanna explode... give it a try!

Expressed everything:

Anger, fear, sadness and insecurities...

Let it out…let it out!

Shout it thru music, poem… anything!

Let this help you.

Hey! C’mon..hurry up!

Before these unwanted feelings overwhelm you.

Oh guys..C’mon..C’mon


Now feeling better?


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    • valeriebelew profile image

      valeriebelew 7 years ago from Metro Atlanta, GA, USA

      Interesting writing, and true. Some deep thinking went into it. Thanks for sharing.

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      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      ..thank you very ma'am once again! ^.^... we don't have to be perfect all the time..we're still human! :)

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      Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      I'm explode in my poems. Well,not really explode, but something like that! ^_^ In real world, usually I only put silent tears. Thanks for sharing.

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      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      ...^.^.. yes ma'am, usually in real life, it's hard to let all things out in a blow.. If we can tolerate things, we normally hide what we feel but of course it depends upon the personality...^.^ thank you for sharing something! ^.^

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      Shari 7 years ago from New York, NY

      pinkhawk - i love all the positiveness you share with us in your Hubs. . you have me addicted now ;) Rated upwards and awesome !

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      Nikkij504gurl 7 years ago from Louisiana

      yes we should all just let go and explode once in awhile. its never good to keep everything bottled in. eventually it will come out and it will be the wrong place and the wrong time and at the wrong person. no one is perfect, life is not perfect, so its useless pretending to be.

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      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      @ wavegirl22- hello ma'am once again, ^.^.. I think that's all I can afford to share- looking at the brighter side of life despite of everything. Thank you very much once again for appreciating my work..^.^

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      pinkhawk 7 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      @ Nikkij504gurl- yes ma'am, I agree! Life is "perfectly imperfect" as they say.. Our heart will suffer if we keep those grudges forever...thank you verryy mucchh for sharing your thoughts..^.^

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      This made me smile. So true and well written, Thank you

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      pinkhawk 6 years ago from Pearl of the Orient

      ..thank you very much once again ma'am! ^.^...I'm glad to make you smile..^.^

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      melanie blake 5 years ago

      get angry dont bottle up anger lash out or smash things up let it go your feel loads better shout sceam too

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