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bubble tickle

Updated on May 31, 2011

View me as you will

I'm an ever changing sphere

bending to the breaking

turning folly out of jeer

i tip toe

over bubbles

i tickle fishy bellies

i smile too wide

at orange juice skies

my boobies bounce like jelly

fancy is my fable

wrists adorned with charm

my hunting's come fortnightly

and i do mean certain harm

i riddle every question

with a certain silly wit

i sit on hearts of men

until their fortunes crack and split

you see an off put shadow

waiting in the wing

just a little glamour

essences of me

so when you sleep to dream

know that dreamers are all fools

distracted by you'r own minds lies

 i drink the better part of you.

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      Rodney Fagan 6 years ago from Johannesberg South Africa, The Gold Mine City

      Great

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      Ouch. I am a Pisces dreamer, and you call me a fool? That hurt my feelings Pinky.

      up and beautiful I will say.

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      not just pieces....all dreamers. and what is wrong with being a fool...? lol. This one i keep looking at and knowing there is something that can be changed to make it better, but i just slapped it up on HP. Ill figure it out eventually, :)

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      pink,

      *whispering* you said boobies- tee hee hee

      *giggle-giggle*

      I thought it was cool bouncin like jelly- 8giggle8 tee -hee...

      good job... Pink

      TH

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      wow...so brutally honest here and you come off as quite heartless when it comes to men lol

      "wrists adorned with charm

      my hunting's come fortnightly

      and i do mean certain harm

      i riddle every question

      with a certain silly wit

      i sit on hearts of men

      until their fortunes crack and split"

      "My boobies bounce like jelly" was funny though lol

      I liked this overall. it was really well put. I especially like the ending, "so when you sleep to dream

      know that dreamers are all fools

      distracted by you'r own minds lies

      i drink the better part of you"

      its like youre saying you are real. and dont waste times on fantasies/dreams/lies. you go for the real part of people.

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanx nikki but im afraid i do waste time on lies dreams and fantasies...but i can be wuite cold when ive had my fill of a man. that is true. and i always ALWAYS try to get to the better part of the guy. that sounds bad, but thats not how i mean it.

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      Nikki,

      Thats just how Pink rolls... shes a one tough cookien enigma, wrapped in a pretty pink bow!!! You wouldn't like her when she gets mad .. (she makes the Incredible Hulk look like Kermit the Frog).... So just be crefull.. no sudden movements or we are both dead....

      *snicker*

      TH

      Pink we KNEW wHAT YOU MEANT little miss "Innocent lil pink flower". Shes a vixen uses her female charms to destroy her boy toys...

      wE KNOW...

      *giggle*

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      tom you know far too much about me. you must be destroyed.

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      Tom Hellert 6 years ago

      Pink,

      just don't call me mean names or i'll cry..*sniff*snif*

      TH-

      I couldnt log in ... or was that your REVENGE *dramatic music*...

      or my stupid fingers kept hitting the wrong keyz

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      NIce. I dont think dreams and fantasies are a waste of time persay. Especially not if you can make them real! Haha Yes Tom, Pink is a Lady of extreme prowess. and I get what you mean. I can be the same way.

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      Jared Peace 6 years ago from the deepest pits of boredom

      aren't you evil.. I like!!...nice one!!

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      i have to get back into comming online more. my god ive been doing so much outside because of the nice weather...im exhausted!!! Nah, dreams arent a waste of time. expecially if they are the right kind of dreams ;)

      Just being honest here people, yes i am a dreamer...i am passionate, and with passion comes rage, but also a deep deep love when im loving the right person. i put my all into whatever i love. hope im making sense, i am very tired.

      and yes Jared, you have no idea how evil i can be!!!! lol

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      pink,

      the outdoots are nice but I wish it wasn't raining every other day.I have been watching allot of soccer and baseball- I may have just got a job too.!!!

      TH

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      Nikkij504gurl 6 years ago from Louisiana

      yep passion and rage i'm right there with ya.

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      not raining every other day here tom, and if it is i guess it hasnt felt like it to me, lol. where am i again?/?

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      Aizona?? its usually dry there- here I have had rain the last 6-8 weekends...\

      fun fun..

      TH

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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      "To sleep, perchance to dream..." in the words of shaky will. I'd rather dream and be proclaimed a fool than to never dream and be proclaimed a KING.

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