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burgundy chocolate

Updated on August 22, 2011

i have the faintest memory of waking up last night and needing to write this down. when i woke up, i thought it had been a dream or something until i rolled over onto it. i dont remember writing these words, and i have no idea where they came from. i do however remember the dream i was having.


i soak into the staircase

burgundy chocolate dream

breathing in your footstep's echo

harbinger of me

shades of melting satin

flow beneath my skin

parting nocturn's curtain

it cuts me deep within

lungs burning with smoke

drawing in you're sphere

licking absolutions

blowing out the fear

i graze in nightshade's meadow

and brush into the calm

the ground's moss cool beneath me

fire fear the dawn

holding out for thunder

the hopeful chance of grey

without the lace i shudder

feeling soul strings fray

down the darkened path

unfamiliar to me

trusting only bare feet

between my forest trees

truly i am home

when top lash kisses cheek

reborn in time that's still

sandman...conquor me.

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      writer20 6 years ago

      Awesome poem. upup

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, i feel like im hunting for easter eggs colin, lmao!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..Happy Birthday my dear Steph Shakespeare!!!!!!

      lake erie time 1:32am Wednesday August 31st

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      samhirata 6 years ago

      This is awesome. Really dark- no pun intended! :)

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lmao, your the best cags.

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      Cagsil 6 years ago from USA or America

      Okay. I'm speechless. It should be a good comment(thinking to myself). :P Marked as interesting, which to say the least, it is. :)

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      i love you madly too epi, as much as i can from here! its 601 pm here and im starving! came across 75 dollars today by accident though, so all in all not a bad day. miss you!!!!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ... well I'd love to taste your burgundy chocolate my dear Miss Shakespeare - one of my favorite writers of all time here at Hubland and who cares about fooking hub scores (Irish spelling - lol) when I've got you babe and I love your comments to me - they make me shiver - Oh god Epi - just shut up and get it out of your system and tell this supremely radiant woman that you loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee her madly !!!!! Hell yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lake erie time 5:29am ontario canada after work with a few beers, live Doors with Jim Morrison and very high winds off the lake .....

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thank you guys so much. i find it funny that something i wrote waking out of dead sleep while half asleep is better than anything ive written lately while awake, lmao. and now that you menaiton it slingobay, im wondering what burgundy might taste like as well. hopefully it would have the richness of really expensive chocolate cake, you know the kind they charge more than 10 bucks a slice for at the snooty resturaunts? lol.

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      sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

      Hi Pink'Um: That was an awesome dream filled with delicious inspiration. I can just taste the flavor of burgundy, the color not the wine, in your words. I wonder how great chocolate might taste if flavored with burgundy wine. What a winning product that might become. Barefoot in your forest, I enjoyed the journey.

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      seicheprey 6 years ago

      "licking absolutions" I have to say that that particular line is a standout in a standout piece. Awesome.

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      this was a very great poem! I enjoyed reading it. It flowed very nice and rolled off my tongue. N i agree with Nikki that song did pop up into mind when I read that last sentence.

      bella

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      "mr. sandman, bring me a dream. make him the cutest that i've ever seen. give him 2 lips like roses and clover and tell him that his lonely nights are over..." lol sorry that song popped in my head after reading this. hehe i really liked this. it was very...dreamy, for lack of a better word. and chocolate must be the sin of dreams. well cover me in chocolate and send me dreaming! lol voted up and awesome!