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“Capricorn’s Cancer” End of Love

Updated on June 9, 2012

Stalling on empty they made exit off a long windy brittle road.

Baffled in astonished shock, nirvana was at their end.

Cursing hysterically in laughter of felt fulfillment.

Standing with synchronize smiled-eyes glancing back.

Reverse sights rolled gloss over their vision of trickery horror-roads.

Beauty gave shimmering gleam coats over chaotic stretched miles.

Sights coiled to bright lathered bliss paved paths of memories.

Hearts filled beaten bloody-red flowed strong with glowing life.

Struggled memories faded back to rise in conquered romance.

Winds journey blew petals from seasons to fall in perfect ends.

Dawn crackled lasting lights that hovered above burning fiery passion.

Life links love setting souls sync entering enlightened ecstasy.

Life giving the ultimate satisfaction leaving life itself meaningless.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      love these lines...

      Life links love setting souls sync entering enlightened ecstasy.

      Life giving the ultimate satisfaction leaving life itself meaningless.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      suzzycue - Your comments mean so much. thank you

      flashmakeit - glad you liked the photos. thanks

      Beyondmax - very pleased to with your comment. thank you

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      mackyi - I am more than happy by your wonderful comment!

      Thank You

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      I.W. McFarlane 5 years ago from Philadelphia

      Such effective imagery and graphics you have used to deliver this poem. Well done, and indeed very beautiful!

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      Susan Britton 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Wow

      Cruelkindness you have a great mind to come up with all these feelings and words to match. I really enjoyed your poem with the fantastic photos to compliment this peice. Well done.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Very interesting, made me think about many things. I'd say philosophical poem, fascinating, really. Great!

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Gypsy Rose Lee - I agree thanks for the awesomeness!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Guess reaching the top peak in passion does sort of make everything pale by comparison.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Vellur - thank you for the sincere comment

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Deep and thought provoking. Loved the picture. Great poem. Voted up.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      TTombs08 - Thank you, I like knowing my poems are doing what I was aiming for. Your comments always mean a lot.

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      Terrye Toombs 5 years ago from Somewhere between Heaven and Hell without a road map.

      Your poetry always has such depth and multiple meanings. And it takes me several reads and contemplation to "get it." Nicely done. :)

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Voronwe - thank you so much for the comment! Happy!

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      The forgetfulness of living itself. I'm amazed, cruelkindness!

      "Struggled memories faded back to rise in conquered romance...Winds journey blew petals from seasons to fall in perfect ends..." I've never seen poetry on soulmates in this way or understanding. Great title.

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      kj force - Wow! your comment is taken with pleasure.

      flashmakeit - Thank you for you comment

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      i just love the pictures you use in this emotional poem.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Cruelkindness..words intertwining giving new meaning to each as they blend as one. Very deep and moving hub..so many never reach this point of inperturable stillnes of mind after delusion has been finally extinquished...

      Awesome hub, loved the choice of pics...kudos and voted up !

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      cruelkindness 5 years ago from an angle view.

      Sheepsquatch thank you for the question

      Its saying once we reach that highest point of satisfaction then we enter into nirvana.

      We want ultimate satisfaction in life once we reach it isn't the rest irrelevant.

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      Sheepsquatch 5 years ago from Springfield, MO

      I just can't see ecstasy making life meaningless, though ecstasy from the wrong pleasures leaving one feeling hurt and that life is meaningless.