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caught in your web

Updated on February 11, 2016

I am one among many spectators,
caught by fire, you have ignited.

Until you haven't hit the right note,
you won't stop,
your thrilling acts,
speeding my heartbeat.

Your arrival is about,
reaching heights,
visuals, unmatched.

For youth,
you are a strength,
a righteous path.

Caught in your web, silly me,
i am dreaming for a rescue.
by you.

© 2016 Hari Prasad S

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      Hari Prasad S 2 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you tamara. I too like to read your great appreciation messages. Your hubs too are genuinely awesome.

      - hari

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      Tamara Moore 2 months ago

      Exciting poem, Hari! I love your poems so much! I haven't seen the new movie, yet.

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      Hari Prasad S 19 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you sir :-)

      - Hari

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      Vishnu 19 months ago

      Lovely

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      Hari Prasad S 20 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks surabhi.

      - Hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 20 months ago

      Lovely! Thanks for the write, bhaiya.

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      Hari Prasad S 20 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks manatita, for a beautiful comment.

      Thanks ruby for appreciating.

      - Hari

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 20 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Thoughtful words. I enjoyed the video..

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      manatita44 20 months ago from london

      Wow! So special ...so succinct ...yet saying it all ...so lucidly. Brilliant poem!

      I love the music and Spiderman, too.

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      Hari Prasad S 20 months ago from Bangalore

      Wow, shanmarie. I feel I am successful. Thanks for your appreciation. :-)

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 20 months ago from Bangalore

      Yes missy, Spiderman is my best comic character too. Nice to know you named your son parker :-).

      His antics are like a dream for all ages to enjoy. Thanks for your reply. Loved it too. :-)

      - hari

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      Missy Smith 20 months ago from Florida

      Very, very, nice. The video goes well. The poem does remind me of a super hero. You know; Spiderman is mine and my children's favorite super hero. A little tid bit of fact I can tell you is; my son's name is Parker. You got it. I named him after Spiderman's human name Peter Parker. I liked Parker better than Peter, so that's why it's Parker, but it was thought of after the one and only mysterious crime fighter. lol. Great Poem!

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      shanmarie 20 months ago

      So many things cross my mind while reading your words. :)

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      Hari Prasad S 20 months ago from Bangalore

      thank you shaloo. that was fast.

      :-)

      - hari

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      Shaloo Walia 20 months ago

      beautiful lines!