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come fer ye

Updated on October 6, 2011

he walks among us

slinking in the shadows

and behind the curtains

"what ch'all gon do when he cums fer ye"

said craven, shirtless and sweating in the barn

"he doesn't come "fer" me...

"he comes for you...." i say, re hooking my bra.

Craven

his name

the only interesting thing about him

...besides his chest and abs

i chuckle

"whats so funny" he says

"chest and abs" i smirk

"what?"

"Fuck off" i hiss

i get up

and walk away

as i pass through the open barn door

a strong breeze rushes past me

and the screaming begins.

....the screaming begins

i can almost feel

the warmth of his blood

memory flashes

of the hay roll

surge through me

as i walk

feeling sexy

i don't look back.




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    • Nefarious_Misery profile image

      Nefarious_Misery 5 years ago from on the move

      Interesting piece. Voted up.

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      hmm...interesting...i really dont know what else to say lol. i am lost as to whats going on here.. who's "he" and why is he coming "fer" anyone? lol questions questions but i like them. its like a dark mystery. and yu walk away still feeling sexy! haha

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      its a dream sequence from the novel im working on.

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      mikielikie 5 years ago from Texas

      Can't wait to read the novel!!!! You do a wonderful job at making me see what you see. And the music that you put with it is perfect. I wish I was as talented.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks mikielikie, i dont think many others are liking this one, but even if it werent part of what im currently writing, i still think it can stand on its own. i love when i can get the middle of a scene and have it be all i need to satisfy me. after all, sometimes too much story can ruin a perfectly good feel dont you agree?

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      tom hellert 5 years ago from home

      pink,

      craven was the name of a vampire in the movie-"Underworld". is you craven a vampire too?

      i wonder....

      th

      nice job Pinkster

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      nope zilla, my craven is just an unsuspecting prick of a mortal whos only good for 2 carnal acts. :) .

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      ....well I've come fer ye .....and my ink is still wet and my heart is beatin' for ya dear Steph Shakespeare.

      Anyone who can use the 'f' word here at the Hub and get away with it - is a hero of mine - not to mention a poetic dream girl!!!!!

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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      Nothing like a good roll in the hay,I say. Wonderfully erotic.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, i dont exactly get away with anything babe, my adds are usually disabled lol

      slingo- ill second that!!!!

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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      Oh where ,oh where has my Pink'Um gone. Oh where oh where can she be. Great dream.

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