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dead whispers...A dark poem

Updated on April 30, 2013
the dead cry
the dead cry

They whisper forever in my ear

Their fingers cold against my face

Filling my heart with twisting fear

As I stumble lost in this dark place


So many voices plead

That I can’t even hear one

Full of painful need

All I can do is run


Blinded by the deep night

I crash and I fall

So far from the safety of the light

That none hear my desperate call


Yet the whispers never cease

Drowning in horror and decay

Lost souls demanding peace

Forcing me to hear all they say

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Death filling every sense

Heartbreak, betrayal and pain

Overwhelming my every defence

Forcing themselves into my heart and brain


Soon I cry their tears

Huddled lost in the dark

Absorbed in the pain of lost years

Their memories tearing mine apart

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In the darkness I die

Claimed by the dead’s cold touch

Awakening to the crows cry

Their all seeing judge


Their pain guiding my steps

Bathing in the phoenix’s fire

I hunt their unpaid debts

Lost in vengeful burning fire

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And still the dead whisper in my ear

Driving me to the guilty unknown

A living ghost delivering pain and fear

Never to find a peace of my own


© K.A.E Grove

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      K.A.E Grove 4 years ago from Australia

      I'm am so glad that you enjoyed my dark poem

      Fulfilling the desire of the dead for revenge by becoming their supernatural defender is the story behind this one

      I don't often explain my poetry as I feel that everyone can interpret poetry differently almost personally

      But as I intend to work on this concept a bit more no harm in letting my inspiration fly

      So very glad you liked it :)

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      FCM 4 years ago from near the Equator

      Your poems sound really goth -- right? I'm not sure what it all means, like for example when you say "Their pain guiding my steps Bathing in the phoenix’s fire I hunt their unpaid debts Lost in vengeful burning fire." The words sound cool but I wish I knew what you were thinking so I could get a feeling for myself!

      I like your poems and I really like the fact that writing makes you happy.

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      K.A.E Grove 4 years ago from Australia

      Epigramman

      As always your words touch my heart and inspire me onwards, your friendship, support and humour has meant a lot to me and I am again blown away by the esteem that you give

      Thank you as always my dear friend xx

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      epigramman 4 years ago

      I so do love this title - it's a title to die for and then your words which follow always inspire the epi-man's dark side. I am looking at a full moon which is now on the wane over the lake and thinking of you and all of the wonderful pieces of writing I've enjoyed from you over the years - so thank you for your friendship and status as a world class esteemed colleague - and like I always say before I leave - you make me want to go away now and write a dark one of my own , lol.

      Sending you warm wishes from Colin , Tiffy and Gabriel at lake erie time canada 2:10pm and have you ever seen The Haunting - not the remake but the original and you can find it at you tube - it's in black and white from 1963 and directed by Robert Wise

      And sharing with a link on my FB page for everyone to see and read

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Shiningirisheyes

      Thanks so much!

      I am always thrilled that you enjoy my dark poems :) Thank you!

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      SilentReed

      I do enjoy my dark poetry immensely but even as I wrote this I couldn't deny the pull of a deeper story that I can see effortlessly forming around the character that this poem helped me to create

      I am so glad that you spotted that too!

      I would love to have a short story again to share with you all :)

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      Shining Irish Eyes 5 years ago from Upstate, New York

      Awesome writing! Very haunting and chilling. Great write and I am voting up and sharing.

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      SilentReed 5 years ago from Philippines

      It's been a while since I attempted to do dark poetry. My mood is too upbeat at the moment.;) This does not mean I did not enjoy this poem. Devoured every line. I also feel there is a story plot within the poem that you might like to turn into a horror story,which many of your followers have come to associate "Nighthag" with. Perhaps a Gothic romance with a macabre ending?

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Pred8a

      It's funny when I first started writing, horror was not the genre I was aiming for, but it is certainly where I end up :)

      I am so very glad you liked this xx

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Wayne Barrett

      Oh indeed, even the dead need an avenging angel , I am so glad you enjoyed this :)

      Thanks

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Always exploring

      I so love getting your take on my work, a poem is not posted properly until it had a comment from you :)

      I am so glad you found this one chilling, I was searching for my scare factor :)

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Ocfireflies

      I am so glad this made such an impact... Thanks :)

      Issac white

      I am so glad you liked my dark poem, it feels like the start of a bigger story so perhaps it won't stay sad forever

      Thanks !!

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Mhatter

      Thank you so much, just as I start to think I've written myself out another poem demands to be written :) I'm so glad you enjoyed my dark poem

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      K.A.E Grove 5 years ago from Australia

      Writinglover

      Thanks pi so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it his one too :)

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      Ausseye 5 years ago

      Hi KnightOf Tag:

      You have evoked a survival theme from my reading of this Hub and so I contribute is an evolving way......

      Psss, psss My dream talks to yours

      Of knights who are but small but bold

      And who have battled fear in moments they dearly hold

      Like Aleman and Gallipoli

      They sense the living and in there moment they uphold

      The spirit of life beyond the moment

      To be, or not to be, is like any tormenting moment

      A flash of light, a twisted of fate

      Heartfelt but just a torment

      In the forever pole of adornment

      Psss, psss I am not saying , that

      In this moment, far from decaying

      Love has its moment to be playing

      Of kisses bold and emotions gold

      Like any solider staying

      He/she has the moment playing

      Where every universe is saying

      Survive this moment and time will tell

      Our future …………

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      PRED8A 5 years ago

      Thank you again for your imagery. The horror you are able to create is inspiring for this reader.

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      Wayne Barrett 5 years ago from Clearwater Florida

      A messenger of Death? Very powerful work!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, this is chilling..You are the best when it comes to lost memories and pain..Loved it..Sharing..

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      TDM 5 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      great job, terribly sad and of course dark. but, I thought it was great. voted up.

      I. White

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      ocfireflies 5 years ago from North Carolina

      simply WOW!

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      Congratulations on this. Well painted mood.

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      Jennifer 5 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      This is awesome, nighthag! I love your work and will always love it! Voted up awesome!

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