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First Kiss

Updated on July 4, 2009

Fingertips whisper down arms

Lips, silk, against cheeks

Shadows candlelit

Slowly, Slowly, Slowly

Languid stretch, reaching

Muscle firm, arms warm

Life sighs, transcendental

Slowly, Slowly, Slowly

Cherry blossoms drift down

on feathers of wind

We are one

Flames dance

Currents flow

We are one


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      SirDent 8 years ago

      You Rock!!!!!!!!

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      mayhmong 8 years ago from North Carolina

      One word for ya, ROLF!

      Love the way you blend the taste in.

      hEven though I Haven't had my first kiss yet?!

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      Cris A 8 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      well somebody's on a roll! like i said before, speak with your heart and keep em coming! thanks for sharing :D

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      Shalini Kagal 8 years ago from India

      WOW!!! go k@ri, go!

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      Laughing Mom 8 years ago

      Okay, that wasn't AT ALL like my first kiss! LOL! That came a few more kisses down the road....

      SirDent is right!

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      jayb23 8 years ago from India

      Fantastic Hub. Keep up the good work.

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      shamelabboush 8 years ago

      Wow, you reminded me of the first kiss. Unbelievable.

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      Hawkesdream 8 years ago from Cornwall

      If my first was like this, think I would still be there. very descriptive.

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      TheSandman 8 years ago

      Makes me want to sing " Kiss me once and kiss me twice and kiss me once again" great poetry.

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      Merle Ann Johnson 8 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      it's been a long long time...:O) Hugs nice job my dear

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      Sir Dent, Thanks!!!

      may, I'm glad you liked it! What, no kisses yet for May?!

      Cris, See what you've started! I am enjoying writing poetry even though I did not think I would like it! :D

      Shalini, Thanks, I don't think I ever got a "Wow" before! :)

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      Hi Laughing Mom! Just a few down the road? Glad you liked it!

      Jay, Thanks, I'll try!

      shamelabboush, I'm glad to remind you! BTW, cute kitten!

      Hawkesdream, Sometimes I wish I was still there...

      Sandman, Sing me a song! Glad you liked it!

      G-Ma, It's been a while for me also! Hugs back at you!

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      TheSandman 8 years ago

      Do you know the song " This Kiss" if I could sing it which I can't My mom use to say I could carry a tune in a bucket with a handle on it, and she was right, that's why I became a DJ, that's the song I might sing

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      Sandman, I added a video for the song I think you mean. I like your mom's saying, that is what my kids would say about me! LOL

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      rimsflorida 8 years ago

      Expressive !

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      Thanks rimsflorida!

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      Randy Behavior 8 years ago from Near the Ocean

      This was lovely. If its o.k. with you I'm going to replace my first kiss memories, which was like kissing a dead fish, with yours!

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      RB, Thanks for such a lovely compliment! Feel free to use my memory, no one should be stuck with a dead fish...they are so cold and smelly! LOL

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      Paper Moon 8 years ago from In the clouds

      A kiss to build a dream on.

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      Paper Moon, A kiss from a dream, more likely.

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      Michelle Simtoco 8 years ago from Cebu, Philippines

      I am transported to another time and place where hearts are beating fast and time is slowing to a standstill... LOL Hey you just awakened the poet in me. :-)

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      ripplemaker, That was beautiful! You should finish that thought! :D

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      Michelle Simtoco 8 years ago from Cebu, Philippines

      Hahahaha maybe I will... :-)

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      I'll be watching for it!

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      scottaye73 8 years ago from Michigan, USA

      Nice!!

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      trooper22 8 years ago from Chicago

      "This was lovely. If its o.k. with you I'm going to replace my first kiss memories, which was like kissing a dead fish, with yours!"

      I second this thought. Fantastic blend of words to express a moment. Mine was a long time ago, but I still remember it as if it were yesterday. Unfortantely we were very young, and it was mearly a promise of something that would come much later...as in years later, and not with the same girl. What an adventure....youth. If only we had the chance to do it over and again.

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      scott, I'm glad you approve!

      trooper, Thank you! I had a dream recently about it...brought it all back to the forefront of my mind! Life is a funny thing!

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      trooper22 8 years ago from Chicago

      indeed it is.

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      ajcor 8 years ago from NSW. Australia

      Beautiful poem k@ri - I'm glad that you had such a romantic first kiss it remained with you to spark this descriptive poem! ....cheers

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      k@ri 8 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      trooper, funny and wonderful!

      ajcor, Thanks! Sometimes you get something so special you can keep it forever!

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      apeksha 7 years ago from India.

      The kiss to feel heaven and,,...to go in the hell...

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      k@ri 7 years ago from Sunny Southern California

      apeksha, I guess it all depends on your memory.

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