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floating emotions !!!

Updated on July 8, 2012
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Floating emotion…!


Feelings are transparent….

Crystal clear could…

Like your eyes…

I can see all through,

You tried to catch

The pieces of stray mind

And they cried….

fear of end came through.

………………………………

Time is precious…

Counting the game

Of life,

Time is crucial..

Breathing the air

Of crime.

…………………………

Game of feelings…

In the name of life goes on….,

Fame of time in mind
is where some words hang on.

Life is floating…and

Time may end here,

As pool of tears..

Is getting dry of fear.

…………………………………

You are precious for the life

As it is floating ….on tears,

Eyes are tired to see through crystal feelings…
Crystal as there are only empty spheres.

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      shamela 5 years ago

      Dear dghbrh,

      Your poem 'floating emotions' is beautiful.

      I feel peaceful after reading your poem.

      I get the impression that emotions can flow freely even if emotions change into teardrops.

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Dear shamela,

      Thanks for your precious comment

      its nice to know that you are feeling peaceful after reading it....this is the best compliment after the endeavor

      you felt it right what i wanted to depict there.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      the emotions floats on every line said.beautiful and unique poetry.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@Spy for your gracious visit and kind words.....

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      Cathleena Beams 4 years ago from Lascassas, Tennessee

      Great poem filled with emotion. I love it!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Catheleena for loving it.....:-)

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