What do u think is the story behind this poem ? Please lemme know guys

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  1. Cracknutcase profile image72
    Cracknutcaseposted 11 years ago


    Birds are chirping loudly
    And Day is giving way to the night.
    I can feel only silence inside me,
    Making me realize nothing is Alright.

    There is a feeling of emptiness left
    And whole lots of memories to regret.
    I feel so battered at this very moment
    Like my heart is burning in a fire torment.

    The rushing wind touched my face
    And the tears stormed out of my eyes.
    Ur absence suddenly struck my heart
    And my whole world fell apart.

    I don't know what happened,
    Why u left me with so many questions?
    All i know is I loved you
    And now am left with no clue.

    Please don't leave me baby
    I'm sure we can work it out.
    Please don't turn deaf to my plea's
    I don't have the strength to shout.

    Just tell me u love me
    And I'll be here forever.
    Just tell me u need me
    I'll leave you never!!

    1. Julie2 profile image60
      Julie2posted 11 years agoin reply to this

      loss of a loved one

  2. profile image0
    Vincent Mooreposted 11 years ago

    I think it's about a broken heart that wants her man to come back to her and never leave her side, she is waiting for him with open arms. I sure hope he comes back to you.

    1. Cracknutcase profile image72
      Cracknutcaseposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      U r absolutely right Vincent... It is about a girl who is unable to accept the fact that the man she loved has left her broken hearted and she is unable to let go n move on...
      Thanks for stopping by and replying smile

  3. Ashantina profile image60
    Ashantinaposted 11 years ago

    Unfinished business from your end and feelings of rejection.
    The realisation of love unrequited.
    The pain you feel of love lost.

    1. Julie2 profile image60
      Julie2posted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Ashantina, I like that! You said it better then I did.

    2. Cracknutcase profile image72
      Cracknutcaseposted 11 years agoin reply to this

      Right Ashantina... The agony a girl feels when she realises tht the man who meant everything to her was just playing a game with her..
      Thanks for replying smile


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