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hold me my dear

Updated on March 22, 2016


hold me, my dear.
I've been waiting for you.
I've been shedding my tears.
I need your embrace to help me through.

I walk through these streets.
long dark roads and allies I go through.
searching desperately in agony.
every fiber of my being longing for you.

I look up to see the sky.
but there is no hope I can see.
of your appearance that I long for.
of your presence that I need.

hours pass as I search.
but it feels more like days.
if I must then i'll die.
before I give up in vain.

onward into the night I dive.
continuing to press forward.
I will not fail to strive.
though this image is vulgar .

a glimpse of you I see.
just beyond the horizon.
this is too good to be.
my thoughts I must guide them.

my heart racing now.
as I sprint to be with you.
my lungs having fits.
as I softly embrace you.

you wrap your arms around me.
as I close my eyes.
I feel you surround me.
and rid me of my disguise.

with a light heart and heavy eyes.
I stand with no pain.
no one can compare with you, my friend,
alone, I stand in the rain.


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      Akhil S Kumar 

      6 years ago from kerala

      you cannot fix that issue . it is an inbuilt feature of hubpages as far as i know.

      it is ok..

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this beautiful insight

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      6 years ago

      @mr.fantasyland thank you for taking the time to read them and @addingsense I know but every time I move them an add by google takes its place. trying to figure out how to fix that. thank you for reading =)

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      Akhil S Kumar 

      6 years ago from kerala


      i like your poem but the emotion i felt vanished when i saw an amazon add at last. kindly change it to the sides..

      great one

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      6 years ago from Grasonville

      I feel the emotion and heart felt words in this story. I see a connection you did make about our work being to some degree similar.

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      Jackie Davis 

      6 years ago

      nice poem


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