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Falling in love again

Updated on June 9, 2010

I'd crept into the deepest darkest place,
Where life and love no longer saw my face.
My heart was cold, my very soul was dead.
My only solace, memories in my head.

You came to me and caught me unaware,
And unprepared, I fell into your lair.
I struggled as you crawled into my mind,
Afraid of what your loving me might find.

And as I stayed resistant to your touch
You never turned away, instead t'was such
an oh so gentle nudging at my soul
that woke me with your ever sweet cajole

'Til finally I melted in your arms
Unfolding as a child would, free from harm.
I gave myself completely, so beguiled.
A whole new world had opened when you smiled.

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      Pure lovliness! I really enjoyed this! :)

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      Bala Subrahmanyam Vishnubhotla 7 years ago from Hyderabad, Telangana, India.

      The essence of love in all its glory!

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Invictu Wow! Thanks for the nice comment. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Just getting started with poetry.

      bala: Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to read my hub. Glad you liked it.

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 7 years ago

      alekhouse, if this is just your beginning of wriring poerty, you are a natural! This poem is Magnificent! :)

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      And, again, thanks for the support. Guess I'll keep on writing them.

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      SweetiePie 7 years ago from Southern California, USA

      I love the title of this poem, and the poetry is very artistic.

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      \Brenda Scully 7 years ago

      this is actually beautiful.... love the picture also..... keep writing poetry, you are a genius.... x

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      SP: Thanks so much for the nice comments. Glad you enjoyed the poem.

      Brenda: Wow, All these years and I didn't know I was a genius. You just made my day! Thanks for commenting

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      Cindy Vine 7 years ago from Cape Town

      This is really good Alekouse, the best poem I've read on this site today, and I've read a few!

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Wow, Cindy, Really appreciate the thumbs up. Glad you liked it. Guess I should try a few more.

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      Susan Reid 7 years ago from Where Left is Right, CA

      Ditto for me, Alkehouse. I found the title very intriguing. The sentiments expressed in the poem itself very familiar. So hard to let love in the second (or third) time. Much easier to stay closed and hardened. Love the "melted" imagery. Lovely. More, please!! MM

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      it is so nice to get all of this support from the community. it really makes it all worth while. Well.......... I'd probably be writing anyhow, but it's so much better when someone responds. Thanks so much.

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      RooBee 7 years ago from Here

      Great imagery, and such familiar notions - I could really relate. Thanks for sharing this. Fantastic job!

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks, Roobee, for taking the time to come and read my poem. Very much appreciated.

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      Hugh Chism 7 years ago

      Beautiful, it made me sad and happy at the same time.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Well, thanks Hugh. I'm glad you liked it.

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      SweetiePie 7 years ago from Southern California, USA

      Thanks for the comment about my avatar. I will go back and look at the bear attack hub comment you made. Sorry I did not respond, I thought I had. I really like your poems by the way.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks for the nice comment, SP, glad you like the poems

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      Cris A 7 years ago from Manila, Philippines

      The title to this poem is so apt as it really unfolds to reveal what it speaks of... Nicely done! Thanks for sharing :D

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      Not Telling 7 years ago from Eastern Nowhere

      Disarming and sweet, captures the feelings and misgivings quite well.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Cris, Thanks for the comment. A question: which do you think is harder to write, prose poetry or rhyming poetry???

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      NT: Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read my stuff.

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      Austin, TX 7 years ago

      Just a good poem...so true too...love it!

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks for the comment. And glad you loved the poem.

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      Denny Lyon 7 years ago from Baton Rouge, Louisiana, USA

      What a beautiful piece, loved it! And such good encouragement to others to dare, one more time, in spite of feeling burned out emotionally, to love once again, discovering they can now rest in the loving. Thank you for the word treat! Blogging this on over to my poetry blog for everyone else to enjoy too! Thanks for writing it.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Denny, Thank you for the great comments. I visited your poetry blog. Didn't have time to stay long, but will definitely go again.

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      Alfreta Sailor 7 years ago from Southern California

      alekhouse, I'm just beginning to read your hubs, and I can't stop. This is a beautiful poem, another one of my passions is reading poetry. Beautiful, beautiful!

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks for the nice comments. I didn't see any of your poems yet. Have to go back and look again. Love poetry. BTW, there are really good poets on hubpages. Check out Frieda Babbly, Am I Dead Yet, and Cris A.

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      Sherri 7 years ago from Southeastern Pennsylvania

      I echo Denny's comment and would like to add how beautifully you captured that moment of awakening out of a long-held and protected resistance..."And as I stayed resistant to your touch / You never turned away, instead t'was such / an oh so gentle nudging at my soul / that woke me..."

      Thumbs up! You have a new fan.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks, ST, really appreciate the great comment...so supportive. And thanks for becoming my fan.

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      prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

      great poem. I like it. It's %100 our right to falling in love again. But for someone who get married...think twice to falling in love again.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      You are so right. Thanks for the comment.

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      trooper22 7 years ago from Chicago

      I am happy for you ALek, thankyou for writng it down and sharing this way. It adds light to the joy when we can open our feelings to others. Poetry Rocks doesn't it?

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      Cindy Vine 7 years ago from Cape Town

      Hey Alekhouse this is such a cool, cool poem! You are a very talented lady!

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      @trooper: This poem actually has nothing to do with me; it's pure imagination

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      @cindyvine: Thanks for the nice comments, Cindy....very much appreciated

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      SweetiePie 7 years ago from Southern California, USA

      Very nice poem, and very appropriate with Valentine's Day!

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      Nancy Hinchliff 7 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks SP. Glad you enjoyed it

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      Nellieanna Hay 6 years ago from TEXAS

      I like it! It expresses the spectrum of feelings. The lines I love best are:

      "I struggled as you crawled into my mind,

      Afraid of what your loving me might find."

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      Nancy Hinchliff 6 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks, Nellieanna. Glad you liked it.

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      ahorseback 6 years ago

      Great stuff,all love can be so fleeting, no? But what great writing material......

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      Nancy Hinchliff 6 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks for the nice comment. Glad you enjoyed the poetry.

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Well done!

      The knack of writing poetry still evades me, but I'm working on it.

      BTW, I lived on a farm in Casey County Ky. for a few years. Beautiful country. I miss it.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 6 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Yes, Kentucky is a beautiful state. With the poetry, it's not a knack, it's a skill. You have to first let it flow, then go back and tighten it, infuse it with imagery and make sure it has rhythm and cadence.

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Perhaps I'd be better off sticking to what I do best...fiction and short stories. :-)

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      Nancy Hinchliff 6 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Nothing wrong with that...:=)

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      funny poetry 6 years ago

      very romantic title and very beautiful poem

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      Nancy Hinchliff 6 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked the poem.

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      love poems 6 years ago

      I think that the poems are giving the god concepts of love i like the love poems. The poems has very roman tic title.

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      writinginalaska 5 years ago from southeast Alaska

      wonderful!! i just recently fell in love too after a very long dry spell. Ain't it GRAND??? I like this poem very much.

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      Nancy Hinchliff 5 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      @wia...That's really great...so happy for you and glad you liked the poem

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      Yaduvanshi 5 years ago from Bharat Vrse

      Lovely

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      Nancy Hinchliff 5 years ago from Louisville, Kentucky

      Thank you for the lovely comment.

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