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i am travelling again

Updated on June 1, 2016

Inspired by the song "Rah pe rahte hain" by Gulzar


I am travelling again.

Dwelling deep,
I'm on a route, steep.

I'm burning,
in this blazing reflection.

Like dust caught in storm,
carried to location, unknown,

destinations are shifting,
when I'm nearing, conclusion.

I have no stakes,
in my own thoughts.

so, I am travelling again.

© 2016 Hari Prasad S

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      Hari Prasad S 14 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you Devika for visiting and liking. Travelling is so important like eating or sleeping. It enriches our understanding of geography. When we dwell deep too our habits, we learn about ourself.

      - hari

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      Devika Primić 14 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Traveling is a good experience and I like the way you expressed that in this poem.

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you twilight. Yes this song is awesome and a happy one. Mine is little melodramatic to suit the mood of poem. :-)

      - hari

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      Twilight Lawns 15 months ago from Norbury-sur-Mer, Surrey, England. U.K.

      I like the poem. It works well. Bravo.

      By the way, this, in my opinion, is the best cinematic reference to travelling ever.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YOYN9qNXmAw

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Pl come, we can do a trek. :-)

      Thanks.

      - hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 15 months ago

      Gulzar The Great! Hari bhiaya, Bangalore dikhao bhai... March mein aari hu. ha ha. I liked the poem. Time to travel! Yepieee!

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Yes bro manatita, come to india with missy, I have invited her too. We can climb few mountains and write few travelogues. :-)

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you vishnu sir for visiting and adding your comments. Loved it. Thanks.

      - hari

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      Vishnu 15 months ago

      Hari,when we travel,we revel something and unravel few others.

      Your human sensitivity is unique and

      desire to touch the heart is profound.

      Let your work ever expand!

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      manatita44 15 months ago from london

      Keep travelling Bro. One day I'll go with you ...ha ha. Nice poem.

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you missy. You visit india, you will like it.

      - Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Ruby thanks for visit and appreciation.

      - hari

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      Missy Smith 15 months ago from Florida

      Traveling in mind. I relate to the whirling of the thoughts that take us away to a location unknown. Then we pick up the computer, or our pens, and start jotting down where we land. I like this! I relate to writing my poetry in a similar way. The only way I will probably ever get to travel. lol...Take care, Hari.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 15 months ago from Southern Illinois

      I think we all travel in our mind's. This was an interesting reflection. Well done...

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Yes shaloo we are all on a journey.

      Thanks for appreciating

      - Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Yes vandana. We all do that when in introspection. You have got it right. Thanks for appreciating.

      - Hari

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      Vandana Patel 15 months ago from India

      Hari, your poem describes continuous journey which we do within our mind through thoughts. Nice poem.

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      Shaloo Walia 15 months ago

      We are all travelers on this brief journey of life. Interesting poem!

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      thank you jodah for appreciation and your visit. Yes, traveling happens on road and everyday in our mind too as thoughts. This poem is a metaphor describing both.

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 15 months ago from Bangalore

      Travelling is a metaphor that, i have used for, thoughts that travel inside. Thanks eric.

      - hari

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      Eric Dierker 15 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I never thought of travelling in this way. Interesting.

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      John Hansen 15 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Hari, your poem perfectly describes the freedom of travelling. Well done.

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