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I am caught up in an imagination as I look at my dried jasmine flower

Updated on February 1, 2014
My dried jasmine flower.Beautiful...
My dried jasmine flower.Beautiful... | Source
My dried Jasmine flower above a dried leaf.
My dried Jasmine flower above a dried leaf. | Source



What is there to remember in me if I care too much?

I am I good?

I am I kind?

Love is a challenge that is spilled with pure potion of life.

I can hardly hear myself believe that I can care.

I was once great.

I was once strong.

I have nothing more to feel than my feelings at looking at my dried Jasmine flower.

I am dried up form hope as my jasmine but I still glow this bright yellow harmony of love.

I admire this bright yellow color from my dried jasmine flower.

Sometimes it is hard to be the only one that cares.

I am sad to believe that I am always there to keep a distance from love.

Love is the low temperature of my heart that cares in the silences of yearning.

I feel hopeless as I wait to remember the unmentioned quantity of righteousness.

Should I heal my despair unnaturally to care?

Oh, I am thinking of my jasmine flower.

My jasmine flower still glows life inside my book along with a dried leaf.


Copyright © Shamela 16/ July / 2012.

My dried jasmine flower on a leaf. A hug?
My dried jasmine flower on a leaf. A hug? | Source

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    • shalini sharan profile image

      shalini sharan 5 years ago from Delhi

      i really loveed your work, it is true, we can actually draw inspiration from anything around us, loved it

      voted up

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      shamela 5 years ago

      Dear shalini sharan ,

      I am happy that you loved my poem.

      I am truly glad that you believe that inspiration can be drawn from around us.

      Thank you for your vote up.

      I send you my best wishes :)

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      deergha 5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      "Love is the low temperature of my heart that cares in the silences of yearning."......so full of feelings.....the photographs...the rhythm is very nice in the poem. I loved every bit of it. I could nicely relate to the depth of the emotion you so beautifully drew in the lines.

      Voted up ...beautiful...interesting...and shared as well:-)

      have a good day ahead...!

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      shamela 5 years ago

      Dear dghbrh,

      It is really nice to hear from you again dear friend.

      I am so happy that you loved every bit of my poem.

      It means a lot for me to know this from you.

      Thank you for your votes.

      Thank you for sharing my poem with your followers.

      I hope you have a great and wonderful day too..

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      This is so beautifully written my friend. I love the comparison of the dried up Jasmine Flower with your emotions. You had me captive with your well chosen words.

    • shamela profile image
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      shamela 5 years ago

      My dear friend Minnetonka Twin ,

      I am so happy that you stopped by to read and comment on my poem.

      I am really glad that you saw how I have tried to create a comparison between my dried Jasmine flower and emotions. I wanted to create something unique about emotions in my poem. It is something I really wanted to express through my words. The unique thing is that there is always something beautiful to write.

      I hope I can continue to express and write beautiful things through my new poems which I look forward to write.

      I thank you for helping me understand that I have written good depth of beauty in my poem.

      I send you my best wishes to you :)

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