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i'm sorry: poem

Updated on March 22, 2016

the past

this is a poem I wrote when I was thirteen or fourteen years old. it isn't very long but it's the first poem I wrote and it's the first time I started to get interested in writing. so this is really what started it all and I thought I should share it with you. so here it goes. I hope you enjoy.

"I'm sorry for the wrong iv'e done,
whatever it may be.
i'm sorry i'm not perfect,
in any kind of way.

i'm sorry you don't love me,
and i'm sorry that I cry.
i'm sorry i'm depressed,
from all this pain inside.

I'm sorry that I bore you.
i'm sorry that I care.
i'm sorry for being me,
and i'm sorry I was there.

I'm sorry I still love you
and i'm sorry I always will.
I'm sorry that this pain you left
has not begun to heal."


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      Dennis 5 years ago

      @phelcky I will keep writing, especially with comments like you and ruby leave on them. thank you.

      @ruby H Rose, thank you for reading it and yes, when I came across this in one of my notebooks it brought back some youthful emotions. thank you for your inspiring comment =)

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      Maree Michael Martin 5 years ago from Northwest Washington on an Island

      Oh yes, the emotions of our youth, writing poems was such a wonderful way to express ourselves. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing and sharing, this is great.

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      Lilly 5 years ago from Denmark

      Very emotional poem. It's truly amazing that you wrote this at such a young age. Please keep writing :)