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inside deja-vu

Updated on February 10, 2016
myself
myself

I feel, I know,
what I am upto.

bygones, woo,
i dwell deep into.

thoughts entering through exit,
delibrating to get through.

Nothing ever gets erased.
I am not done, with myself

i am inside deja vu.

© 2015 Hari Prasad S

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you sir for your comments.

      This is a an abstract poetry about experiencing past happening again in the present and how the future would be.

      - Hari

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      Vishnu 18 months ago

      Back to the future again!

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      Hari Prasad S 21 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank missy.

      I have written it as an abstract and not stating very clearly, if this feeling is from outside or inside. Mind is so powerful that it can sense the repetitive things. probably because nature of things have common hints.

      I think deja vu is an anomaly of mind.

      I have written what you have really expressed.

      - Hari

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      Missy Smith 21 months ago from Florida

      I definitely wanted to read this one. I have experienced deja vu many times. It's quite a weird surreal feeling, because when it happens, I know I have experienced the same thing before in life, but the question is; have I slipped back, or am I just repeating in a different time?

      I think your poem is portraying deja vu maybe a little differently than I just stated, but this is what I have experienced with deja vu. :) Good one!

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      Hari Prasad S 21 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you surabhi. :-)

      - hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 21 months ago

      A great message, bro. In fact, an amazing one. Well done!

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      Hari Prasad S 21 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks for yours thoughts,

      on my abstract.

      Geena and devika.

      - hari

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      Genna East 21 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      What an interesting poem; I liked the metaphor and thought that characterize this cool write. :-)

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      Devika Primić 21 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Hmm! A very good one! Always from the heart.

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      Hari Prasad S 21 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks pearl for your appreciation and comments. I am happy you liked this poem.

      - Hari

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      Pearl Sepuya 21 months ago

      Straight. To the point :)

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      Hari Prasad S 21 months ago from Bangalore

      He he. I know not, what is in store.

      - hari

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      manatita44 21 months ago from london

      Great place to be; means you change the future, perhaps. He he. Interesting take, Bro.