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Updated on April 15, 2012

caught me in a glistening spiders web

then laid the boom on me

still thinking that your lies

are something i can't see

paint for you a picture

of a girl who's had enough

and you'll see why similar behavior

really rubs me rough

you think that you can glamour

and glitter up your lies

but i am one who sees straight through

your mis-tempered pursuit to deny

nothing can escape me

I'm not a barbie doll

I'm sexy, intelligent, insightful

I'm every shady's downfall

so keep packing on the sugar

and you'll not only be denied

Ive picked up and put down men before

there's only one's survived.

be it simple little pleasantries

or flat out telling me the truth

i can go with either choice

but I'm not the one to be abused.

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      Jessee R 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      super awesome! Felt like the TRUTH_ATTITUDE hitting hard on some1. Nice stammering poetry

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      4elements 5 years ago

      This was quite lovely, The words blended well together, and painted a great picture in my head. blessings.

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      Jennifer Vasconcelos 5 years ago from Cyberspace and My Own World

      Great Poetry and beautiful picture :)

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      yea well someone is telling me they arent doing wrong again when they are. what am i a fucking idiot? thanks 4elements. and just so you know, one of our common interests just went to the top of my uninterested list. i love your writing. and i love your comments. just venting.

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      4elements 5 years ago

      When you are being lied to its never a good feeling. I prefer truth even if it hurts. No I don't think your an idiot and I realize that was probably rhetorical question. Blessings

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      lol, thanks

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Wow ..i love this one ! Somebody says , never comfort me with your lie . Better to be told in truth that to live in fantasy of lies.

      I love this line--i can go with either choice

      but I'm not the one to be abused.? More power pink !

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks angelme566!

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Pink...angel will do never mind the me566 ;)

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thank god lmao!

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      Nikkij504gurl 5 years ago from Louisiana

      Tell em girl! Dont let anyone walk all over you!

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      James Kenny 5 years ago from Birmingham, England

      Wow, powerful stuff. Your writing comes straight from the soul, you make the words leap off the page. Fantastic work. Voted up and shared.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      I live by the motto " Shit on me once..I may forgive, shit on me twice and start tearing my hair out for toilet paper and your ass is grass and I will be the lawnmower". You are the only one that can stop the abuse..don't walk away from the relationship...RUN !

      Well written poem..look forward to more of your words..

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      Hmmm..me thinks someone is a little tired of 'the game'! Why do some people think we're stupid and will believe anything? That the more they talk nonsense - the more it will start to sound like fact to us stupid 'barbie dolls'. You tell 'em gf! I'm right with ya on this!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      awe, thanks jkenny!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      kj, im not being abused. but if i were id sure as shit come to you for advice lmao. cant wait for you to read more, and ill be over to see your page soon!!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      i want to make it clear that this is not about my boyfriend, this is about someone else that i knew was lying to me. thank you so much imkarn23, love your comment!!

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      CM Sullivan 5 years ago from California

      Sounds like you don't take even an ounce of bullshit in your relationships, whether they are friendships or otherwise! Sounds like someone is using you or manipulating you for their own emotionally deficient needs. Good stuff pink.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Thats where your wrong, ive taken more than my fair share of shit and ive become fucking sick of it. So no one that is expendable gets to dump their toxic shit on me anymore. And thats my new rule. :)

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      CM Sullivan 5 years ago from California

      You are too nice if you let someone you didn't know too well do it in the first place. ;) That is definitely a good rule to go by!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Im not even all that nice really lmao, i just have a big heart where my middle finger should be lol

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      over it 5 years ago

      This is great love it voted up it says it all....You go..

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Over it - he told me today that he only spoke to you casually a few times.

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      over it 5 years ago

      total lies i have proof all you want a week ago

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Yes, email or phone. Let me know

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