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Color codes and contrast poem

Updated on January 9, 2013
By zigazou76
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Many Colors

When things don't seem to matter,

its life that gets shattered,

Situations may amplify,

conditions turned to critical,

some appear miserable,

that's when faith steps in,

when inspiring moments,

can save the day for most men.......


By zigazou76
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People get tested,

life turns restless

into a sort of stressed out mess,

Time ticks & things shift

games picked like flamed bricks,

High definition 3D shit

Faced with twisted bits,

or watching them torching new flicks

Trapped dots playing hop scotch,

pole dancing cops rotating around

on top of circular rocks,

Divisional plots collisional blocks

changing of the artificial crops........



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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Thank you again Gypsy, I'm at a loss for words now, you have stunned me here with all your hub loving support recently, you got me speechless. Wow!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Fantastic video. Life tests us each and every day. Some days the colors are bright and the not so good ones they fade.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Hello @Movie Master, I'm so glad you think so, I been letting my poetry writers voice run off into many tangents recently, it feels so good to be free mentally that is, hehe!

      Thanks for your cool comment here, it is much appreciated by me.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Thank you once again @Flashmakeit, your comments are always well taken, and very thoughtful.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Creative and clever - great writing!

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      flashmakeit 5 years ago from usa

      Distinctive quality, rare and a work of art in words which make this a very colorful poem.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Thanks so much Ryem for showing me some hub love here, that was thoughtful of you to do, and I truly appreciate it. Nonsense poetry is what it does, right!

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Thank you Writer20, I tried to make very little sense of it all, and to bring out whatever came to mind I guess, hope many other folks can enjoy my mind running loose here on hubpages, LOL.

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      You did good job writing this one. I really like the rhythm in all of the rhyming words.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      @whonunuwho, thank you for your cool comment s quite thought provoking indeed, because life is full of many things indeed, nicely written.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I think you nailed this poem in a wonderful way.

      Voted up,awesome and interesting, Joyce.

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      whonunuwho 5 years ago from United States

      Yes. life is like a puzzle and colorful patterns as in modern art, that show splashes of reds, blues and whites, together or apart, some are sensible and others take no care, in how they are arranged and in our despair. Words that rhyme and those that do not, can move us all quite a lot. So keep up the task by spreading the word, bring out your feelings, all to be heard. Nonsense, mine...nice work, Emrah.

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      Mike Pugh 5 years ago from New York City

      Hey Bill, I unleashed this poem to see the reactions, and if they are good I will write many more poems like it.

      I'm just trying to break down differing aspects of life at its seams using poetry, a bit here, just for the fun of it all, you know. After all its nonsense, LOL! Thanks for the cool comment.

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      Bill Holland 5 years ago from Olympia, WA

      "pole dancing cops...." great line Mike! We all get tested, don't we....faith my friend...it's all about faith....in others...in God...in ourselves. Well, I have faith in you, buddy; you are one of the good people in my life. Thank you!