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long time ago i died

Updated on August 3, 2011

long time ago i died

Its a long time ago i died, with my eyes open wide,

depicting the matter that i have lost my pride.

now the wounds on the surface of the skin can't be hide,

its a long time ago i died.

dreams were washed away with a sudden tide,

i couldn't run for i had no place to hide.

with almost all the energy exhausted but still on ride,

it was a long time ago i died.

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    • Eiddwen profile image

      Eiddwen 

      7 years ago from Wales

      This poem definitly stirred a few heartstrings of mine.

      I vote up without a doubt. You are indeed a very talented poet.

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

    • prashant angiras profile imageAUTHOR

      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      thanks Emichael for dropping by,it is such a pleasure that you liked the poem.

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      emichael 

      7 years ago from New Orleans

      Interesting one, prashant. Short but very effective. Well done. Voted up, interesting, and beautiful.

    • prashant angiras profile imageAUTHOR

      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      thanks ubanichijioke for dropping by ,i am glad that you felt the mood.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 

      7 years ago from Lagos

      A great poem from prashant. I can feel the mood. So sad. I hope you find a place for your dreams here on HP. Great piece

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      Blondey Hubpages 

      7 years ago

      Wow! nice read...

    • prashant angiras profile imageAUTHOR

      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      thanks Dim Flaxenwick for dropping by,thanks for commenting.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      7 years ago from Great Britain

      I´ve rated this hub up and beautiful. I think the concept of what you´ve written is brilliant.

      You have the makings of a very good poet.

    • prashant angiras profile imageAUTHOR

      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      thanks movie master,i was graced by your visit..

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      Movie Master 

      7 years ago from United Kingdom

      Hi prashant, a very powerful yet sad poem, I enjoyed reading and thanks for sharing.

    • prashant angiras profile imageAUTHOR

      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      thanks matthew weese,i respect your comment i will try to bring about changes to make my hub more interesting..

    • prashant angiras profile imageAUTHOR

      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      thanks Matthew Weese for reading my hub..i appreciate your comment..

    • prashant angiras profile imageAUTHOR

      Prashant angiras 

      7 years ago from shimla(india)

      thank chanroth for reading my hub,i am glad that you liked it..

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      Matthew Weese 

      7 years ago from Auburn

      It is ok....Needs a little fluffin but has the potential to be a great piece.

    • chanroth profile image

      chanroth 

      7 years ago from California, USA

      This is really sad...very sad...I enjoy your hub! :)

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