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Love Unleashed

Updated on November 6, 2012

When you don't have love

how does it feel

like an apple....without a peel

Like the sky

without the sun

no love around...just no darn fun

i will find my love

with words that sing

like a bell...

it will loudly ring

My lover will come

my love, my dear,

be here and kiss

and hold me near

Let me take away your pain
bring the sunshine ....where there was rain
fill your heart and soul..

with love
the kind that flies softly
like a snow white dove .

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Cher , my lovely . you have warmed my heart with your comment and the visit to my hubs. hope I have made a follower and I will also look to your hubs and see what I find. Welcome my sweet , read and enjoy.

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      CMarie 4 years ago from York, Maine

      Hi, Cher here from York Beach Maine. Just dropped in and took a look at some of your poetry. Very nice. What I've read so far is nice and crisp and fun ... There's a hope in there. Thank you so much!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline , thank you gorgeous, you are the best. I value your comments very much.

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      Caroline Marie 4 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Very beautiful. Full of emotion. :)

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      b, glad to hear from you . so glad you and loverman came out of that mess on the east coast safe . thanks for the comments and take care.

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      Very Beautiful Expression of "Love" Cleaner. How could any woman resist? You are the Best!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches, thank you for the comments. yea, it sounded like a cool metaphor so i used it.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      You really had me with an apple without a peel, I love apples and to think about eating them without the extra crunch would be such a loss! Good connection to the thought of love lost. Lovely!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      thank you sparrow, your comments are always appreciated

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      Beautiful poem Micheal. God bless you!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @blossom , thank you for the comments.

      @vincent my friend, thanks for the comments. we all have felt the sting of love and me and you have lost loves and chased love only to find out that we were not fast enough to catch it . ha,ha, but we keep on going.

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      Vincent Moore 4 years ago

      I am without love in my life, yet I am resigned to my fate. I live as best I can without it and press on towards the mark. I write in solitude and find peace in my aloneness. I've tasted love and been loved so that I am thankful for, many have never had love from birth and tis sad very sad indeed. I pray all peoples on earth find love and share it. Peace and blessings I send to you this night fellow poet.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      This is a lovely poem and tells so clearly just how love should be for each one of us. Like Eddy, I really enjoyed those last few lines.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      Thank you Eddi, your comments always bring sunshine to my heart.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Let me take away your pain

      bring the sunshine ....where there was rain

      fill your heart and soul..

      with love

      the kind that flies softly

      like a snow white dove .

      Beautiful words which I vote up.

      Eddy.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ acaetnna, thank you for the love. and the comments.

      @James-wolve, thank you for your fresh loving observation of how strong feelings of love should be .

      @Faith Reaper, thank you for the kind words . the lord spreads his love and we share it together. thank you for the comments.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Well, if that poem doesn't bring your love around, then I am clueless as to what would!!! Very lovely indeed.

      Voted up, awesome and beautiful

      In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      Love is amazing.Without it we are like an empty shell echoing nothingness.Beautiful poem.I voted up.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Love is the ultimate emotion. Your poem is lovely.