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Waiting, just waiting till you are ready

Updated on May 29, 2010

ALL I NEED IS RIGHT BEFORE MY EYES

Days go by without notice

My thoughts are brewing

Our passion and desire are one

My dreams unfold before me

The heat of my body is constantly rising

I feel my ongoing incredible strength exploding

The willingness to accept each other for who we are

The incredible urge to try to improve on what is already wonderful

Comfort that comes from within and travels through my veins to every inch of my body time and time again

I am able to zoom in on your every emotion and enlarge within seconds

Focus of two people practicing love and enjoying are mistakes as well as our fabulous achievements

The future benefitting from the tremendous gift we keep on giving

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      jinyMarte I keep on thinking of new ways to feel better.If I can do it then I can teach others.One small step to make people happier.Keep smiling you are doing that all on your own.Thanx again.

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      JinnyMarte 5 years ago

      DREAM ON I am humbled. I think when we walk with The Lord we can understand each other better than anyone else because our spirits are united in Him for we are one. I have also been through this path you talk about and I don't think I am finished yet. Good thing is I am not the only one, so I know I am not alone... :-)

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      JinnyMarte I am happy we are on the same path and I take great pleasure on sharing my day with you.You expalined exactly what I feel like.Are you sure you are not inside my head?Thanx so much.

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      JinnyMarte 5 years ago

      Ah my dear friend I am really humbled by this words of yours. I agree with you. It is a journey we all share in common, that path to find happiness. I wonder if being there we will comform to it or just keep striving to improve. Your analogy of the cobble stone reminds me of a story I am familiar with from a pastor at the church I used to follow when I lived in Virginia. He spoke about how God refines us like a stone in the waters of the river. The water currents continue to move the stone around and polish that stone and force it against the rest of the stones in the river and until it becomes smooth and perfect. This represents the works of God in us. Just like that cobble stone path. It is a wonderful trail that leads to the fullfillment of the promise of the Lord to quote some of your words. And I too have been blessed with the gift of finding friendship in strangers here on this pages... The journey continues indeed.

      With kind regards, Jinny

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      DREAM ON 5 years ago

      JinnyMarte You keep asking and I will find a way to deliver.Each step has been walked over so many times the cobble stone is worn and so smooth.I see something different.I see a wonderful trail that leads to promise.I hear the footsteps of the past echo in my ear.I feel the joys and laughter lead the way.I hear the praise of everything good shining on the stone that is now dull.I feel surrounded by others who are strangers and now have become friends.We all seek the same goal in the end.One journey to happiness that we can all learn to share if we just learn to care.From here on out I hold my head up high and walk through weeds that have grown in the cracks.Experiencing life with you is fun and invigorating.The journey continues...

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      JinnyMarte 5 years ago

      This is very intense and so filled with this delicate yet intense feeling. I really liked the words: ..."the willingness to accept each other for who we are..." Brilliant words to live by and accompanied by the passion spread along the lines is just complementary... Awesome poem!

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      joy56 you are the mother that is always taking care of her son.What a wonderful feeling to be looked after no matter how long it takes me to learn.You are in my thoughts and in my writings.You make me think when my thoughts are empty.You make me wonder when things are wonderful.You make me feel and see things I never new before.I am very happy to be your son.Thanks so much for being the person who you are.Don't change for no one except yourself.Spend time to know yourself and you will always make the best choices in life.

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      Joy56 7 years ago

      so are you or are you not my son?

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Micky Dee I am a working progress.Just don't stop here you will have to grin and bear a thousand more.I hope you can take it.If not go for a good bike ride and please come back when you feel refreshed.

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      Micky Dee 7 years ago

      Very nice poem DREAM ON! Dream on Sir!

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Seasoning I am on cloud 9.It is so nice to be loved.Sophie is beyond nice. I am just opening my eyes after dreaming all night long.You know cats sleep most of the day.That is what makes them so creative they never stop dreaming.

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      seasoning 7 years ago

      just read the poem and all the comments. Sophie has fallen in love you with you did you read about it yet, she has a picture of you on her hub...... ah sweet as a rose.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I will have to find which hub I was on..It is so nice to see you.I hope everyone in your family is healthy.I also hope your work is going fine.I have trying to write more.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      here i am back again, so who thought you were my son, i thought you were my son.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Poet A little humor can go along way..I just want to thank you.One of your followers came to my hubs because she thought I was your son.I think you will be proud of your son he has a new friend.talk soon..We lossed power and I am writing a new hub.Close your eyes for this one it might be a shocking surprise.(lol)

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      ha ha ha...... thanks

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I will be waiting,waiting till you are ready.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      i am me.... speak tomorrow maybe

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      This is a miracle right before my eyes.I am right the first time in my life.Now if we lived in the past I could of never been right.Maybe tomorrow I will be right again?maybe I won't and you will be.Thats my dream come true.You can become who you know deep inside of you. Not what I think or anyone else.Be you!

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      you are quite right of course

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I have spirit thats all that counts.Itry AND i Ma ke lo tS OFMI STAKES but I will keep trying and getting better and so will you.You can not stop who you are why let anyone else stop you either.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      i would not even try, you are the best, it is nice, heartfelt and well received

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I am sure you could of made it better.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      the last line of this lovely poem does kind of sum things up i feel don't you

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      seasoning I don't know why?You want it come and get it.Why waiste time.

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      seasoning 7 years ago

      chat chat chat chat, we dried up eventually eh,

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Carolina MUscle I think so too.Thanks for your nice comment.

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      That last line makes the whole poem!

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      GlstngRosePetals I am so glad you liked it.Have a wonderful day.

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      GlstngRosePetals 7 years ago from Wouldn't You Like To Know

      I really enjoyed reading your poem and look forward to reading more..

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I only get 2 holidays a year Christmas and Thanksgiving.I will be thinking of how thoughtful you are and I am sure the wonderful seniors will always love you for it.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      oh yeah people are so fascinating..... you never know what people are thinking really...... i love to spend time with my family so new year will be a great time for me, as i am working 12 hours Christmas Day with my old folk who are my extended family really

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Poetlorraine I am ready as I will ever be.I really like to people watch and wonder what there thinking.How about you?I hope you have a wonderful Christmas and a joyful new year.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      you are so wise...... are you organised for the holiday season

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Brandonfan I love your comments.I wish we could all focus on how much we have going for each of us.We are too busy complaining what we don't have and forget all the good we worked so hard for.Enjoy,laugh and make more happiness than the day before.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      poetlorraine life is filled with those little chores that keep sneeking up on us.What a great accomplishment when all the chores are done and the house smells nice and clean.Great job as always remember the little things you do show your character and who you really are.I have never seen anyone work so hard at cleaning.I do it but I just can't wait till I can relax and enjoy waiting for the fun to to begin.Like foreplay to wonderful sex.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      yeah maybe if we relax a bit it would be better

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      brandonfan 7 years ago from Mid West

      They say that Love is work, but when we work on it too much it sometimes seems to drown instead of flourish. I really liked this poem. It sends a message of positivity.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      enjoying life, cleaning ironing etc .........

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      You should enjoy all the time you have no matter if cleaning or relaxing. Have a great day.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      why does everything always happen to me

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      taking all your advice on board honest i am

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      All the duties for keeping your house clean including cooking,cleaning,ironing,making the beds,etc.plus any food shopping are for both of you to do as a team.Not just him or you.You can trade off.You can do it all like you have in the past.He can do it all.You can pay someone else to do it on occasion.Give yourself a needed break.This makes a marriage work.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      guess what he has starting doing the cooking and shopping, and he is good at it...... going to get my daughter to iron and i will pay her, now the cleaning, who will i get to do that...

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      poetlorraine I think you should let your husband do the housework for the month of January.That is such a good idea.

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      seasoning 7 years ago

      the incredible urge to improve on what is already wonderful, that is my favourite line

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      housework is the pits... oh yeah a hub on housework, being a sin...... coffee, i will think about that one,

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I was off today and haven't stopped all day.Doing errands and getting things done.So much fun.I am glad you dropped by.OOOPS I have to throw laundry in.Somethings never get done.Do you remember you had a hub on doing housework.I had given you a few comments to make it fun.I hope that will happen tonight for me.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I am sure when you have the time you could do an excellent hub on coffee maybe a title like Coffee Anyone? You could put your unique touches on coffee brewing and other pictures that are sure to captivate all the coffee drinkers in the world.I'm sure they could smell it where ever they are.Just a thought.One of many that keeps my mind bubbling.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      just have to go to do some work, so lazy today, just soaking up friendship on here, speak soon, will be back of course

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      coffee is truly an addiction, and i have it...... i make it to my perfect liking, nescafe out of a jar granuals.... tiny bit of milk..... i should write a hub about how bad it is for you, especially when you drink as many cups as i do a day. I am just sooooo addicted, but i have tried to give it up, cut down whatever, but always go back to it

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Good as new.What kind of coffee do you like?So many people love coffee?I never did like the looks of it.I agree the smell is nice.But that is one taste I never acquired.I think your next hub should be on coffee?what do you think?I know why people love to drink it.They get hooked on the caffeine coffee has.Once hooked they need it to get them going in the morning every morning.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      and now you are all stitched up........ anytime just give me a yell, going for a coffee right now

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      poetlorraine I always love company.I didn't mean to keep you up so late.I just had so much to say.I was bursting at the seams.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Prettydarkhorse I am glad you like it.I find that even in the strongest loves there are differences that we constantly find and with patience and more love they work themselves out.

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I'm blushing now.I can't wait to read it.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      pretty darkhorse, oh yes please do intrude

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      prettydarkhorse 7 years ago from US

      Oh, can I intrude, lovely poem, I really love it, LOVE is like that, improving adn accepting of each other! have a good day! Maita

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      just wrote a hub for you it is called communication

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Do you know that your a chip off of the old rock.Talk to you soon.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      i love rocks, collecting them on the beach is great fun and then making a rockery with beautiful flowers for the summer. I used to do that and get my sons to carry the rocks to the car. So much to ponder on a beach isn't there. Rocks in your head no i doubt that

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I really mean collecting rocks.Do you realize how old they are and there still here.Nobody cares about rocks.I must have rocks in my head.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      collecting rocks. That was something you never actually mentioned. i am puzzled by the fact that my poem about collecting shells has actually got the highest score of all my poems wonder why? Are you trying to make me feel guilty, you have not been writing much have you?

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I don't know if you noticed but you just put my hub activity of the charts.Before today you left and had many other things to do. I hit rock bottom.Did I tell you I started collecting rocks.Pretty cool.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      to be one of my favourites, i say you are lucky.... i am extremely selective..... probably too much so, but if you made it you sure made it.....

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      I am just like an old shoe.I get kicked around alot.But I could of been thrown out years ago and I wasn't because I am one of your favorites.How lucky am I.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      true, have you been having typing lessons, hard to keep up with you

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Desires are great they motivate you farther than you thought you could ever go.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      i will have to give that one a little thought i feel.... desires hmmmmmmmm

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Yes you never get to leave on an empty stomach.But your desires may always be elsewhere?

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      cook you jest

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Just a short order cook with an imagination that won't stop.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      aw no you have just made the day start with a smile, a laugh and all good things, may the day continue as it has started...... you are an actor right?

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      No i am not insane.I like being asked questions.I love to talk remeber.I am a certified broken heart mender.There now you can sleep good tonight.I am just a guy who likes to see people happy.So sorry to have added more stress in your life.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      i know you hate being asked questions, but are you insane

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Whats that mean?

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      f### o##

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      You kept me guessing on that one.I had to look it up.Enigma An obscure or ambiguous saying;riddle 2.anything that puzzles or baffles.Thats really nice of you.I think that was a compliment.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      you are an enigma for sure.....

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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      What can I say you help motivate me.

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      think i found it....... hey this is good, why do i sound surprised all your hubs are good....