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Lucky You, Lucky Me

Updated on March 16, 2012

Luck of the Draw


Lucky you, Lucky Me,

how does luck choose

where to be

does it pick

it's will for free...

is it alive or something

that we really don't see...


When we met

the love was lucky me

then I found out the love

was shared by us three

You and him

and dumb little me


When i met you

the love was lucky you

you made me think

the love was true

how did I know

you would make me blue.


Sometimes love has two sides

it can make you happy

or make you cry

just like luck

is good and bad

when love depends on luck

it can make you sad








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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raciniwa, thanks for the noodles, (i mean comments).

      thats me I try to amaze.

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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      so sorry to burst your bubble but Lucky me is a noodle brand here...lol...

      seriously, i'm lucky to meet a great poet like you Michael...you always amaze me with your poetry...

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      ytsenoh, thank you for visiting "my humble hub". your feedback is greatly appreciated. such nice comments are welcome from a great poet as you!

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      Cathy 6 years ago from Louisiana, Idaho, Kauai, Nebraska, South Dakota, Missouri

      Nicely written and it flows well. It brings to the forefront of readers their personal experiences, so you do a great job in bringing your words together to pronounce such effects. Thank you much.

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @rosemay, thank you for your comments,and support.

      @ Blossom, my lovely follower, thanks for commenting, and your support.

      @ teaches, thank you for your comments, your support is always appreciated. thats what hubpages is all about. supporting each other and leaving a comment.

      Thank you.

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      Dianna Mendez 6 years ago

      I think you have highlighted what not to trust in a relationship. Luck is not a basis for true love. Great poem.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 6 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      So lovely, but so sad. I don't really believe in luck, I think God has a hand in it somewhere, but it's a great poem. Voted up.

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      Rosemary Sadler 6 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Nice poem but so sad. I'd rather trust in fate than luck :)

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      acaetnna, you can cry on my shoulder anytime. thanks for visiting and leaving a comment.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Beautiful but indeed sad - where are those tissues?!!!

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dreamer, thank you, you always like my poetry. one of my faithful followers, always ready to comment, good or bad . thanks, for thats what hubpages is all about.

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      Jen Christopherson 6 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      Beautiful!!! You have such a way with words!!! Voted up and beautiful!

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ fennelseed, thanks for the follow, and your feedback. you always leave a comment and thats what hubpages is all about.

      @ Audrey, thank you for the comment. Glad to see you again.

      @ Katrine, thank you , you always have a positive word for me . thank you

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      KatrineDalMonte 6 years ago

      Michael, what a sad poem..but love comes in many forms, sometimes there can be more between 2 people living apart than 2 people living together for many years. Voted up and awesome.

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      Audrey Howitt 6 years ago from California

      Sad write but a great one--thank you!

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      Annie Fenn 6 years ago from Australia

      This makes me sad too!! A great poem, I guess you just never know your luck. My votes to your cleaner and SHARING.

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