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Updated on January 2, 2013

slow rolling ache

needed breath, and coddle

feeling filled again

just the ticket for a friend

moving hands and rushing bubble

if this is life, im in trouble

trouble seeks what madd hearts yearn

giving spinsters several spurns

hardly taken, possessed in deed

haunted houses hold the key

years and years of idle spinning

ran the course, despite the feelings...

new beginning, paints not dry yet...

evermore it treasures wet...

barely broken, new, unscathed

consequence has found its grave

a perfect fit for understanding

shaken hands

hearts always pounding

like in times of old

when barely known

proposals welcomed

brides being sold

feel like a jem

a precious thing

too new to even wear a ring

together for love

not for a tether

not because of mistakes , or paper letters

verbal promise

still holds something yet

so much more romantic

than contracts and debt

holding together

decisions made

something to be said

for drawing a spade

circle circle circle spin

hold me tight and soak me in

count on you

count on me

nothing better than the feed

listen, learn, and talk much less

it shows the overcoming

of duress

weathered by others

found anew in each other

its simple, but the smile

is worth every second of trouble....

2 wrongs

who knew....

can make a right

it just depends upon the fight..........


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    • Theater girl profile image

      Jennifer 4 years ago from New Jersey

      "Two wrongs... can make a right" I like this line very much.

      I enjoyed reading this very much. The idea that not everything is black and white....right and least that is what I see in it!

    • JayDeck profile image

      JayDeck 5 years ago from New Jersey

      Hey Pink. Glad to see you're still writing! I too lack understanding, but enjoyed much of the wordplay. Keep it up.


    • the pink umbrella profile image

      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      its part of the insides of feelings involved in my relationship. I guess no one but me or the other party could see inside of it :)

    • sligobay profile image

      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      Hi Pink"Um. Happy New Year. I like the feel but lack the understanding. I like the newness and freshness of wet paint. The message seems all good.