ArtsAutosBooksBusinessEducationEntertainmentFamilyFashionFoodGamesGenderHealthHolidaysHomeHubPagesPersonal FinancePetsPoliticsReligionSportsTechnologyTravel

Mirror Into Myself chpt 1.

Updated on July 28, 2013

Mirror Into Myself

-Sometimes I lay restless in bed, gazing upon the ceilings of my small apartment.

As I gaze I begin to see images that connect together in which they form a movie.

It is as if my I am sitting alone in a movie theater while the film unfolds onto the screen.

As I lay looking upon this movie I begin to feel a tremendous knot in the pit of my stomach as my throat becomes clenched.

I feel as if my body was turned upside down and my insides seeped out slowly through me.

The epic story upon the ceiling was that of a young child, from my analysis it seems this boy was in a great deal of pain.

It seems this child wandering around the house, was weeping in sorrow as if a great stone was crushing his heart.

The boy holding a small teddy bear in his left hand, walking down a dark hallway looked to be trying to say something and also as if he was looking for something.

It became clear to me this child was very distraught, but as I peered more closely and tried to hear the words of the boy, I felt a sharp pain in my chest, as if I had been pierced deep by a knife and the coldness of the blade went clear through my flesh and cut deep into my soul.

Watching the grotesque images in the background as the boy slowly walked down the dark hallway I realized the boy was hurt and was limping.

As I listened closely and stared at the lips of the young boy as he uttered his words, they became clear to me.

He was saying “Mommy where are you, is daddy hurting you?”, but there was no response.

The only sound I could hear was the cold wind whistling down the hallway as it brushed against his face, hitting the tears violently pouring from his eyes.

Walking the boy stopped at the end of the hallway, looked up at a rather large and tall door, but something was bothering me deeply.

The door which this boy stood before was all white with no door handle at all.

What was intriguing was not that the door handle was gone, but there was a shape in the door as if it was fit for a key, but the shape of the key was that of the boy’s hand.

The key was also about eight feet taller than the boy.

Impossible I must say for this child, this infant, this toddler, at the most to reach and open this door.

The boy began to jump in front of the door, trying desperately to reach the key
shape at the top of the door.

But astoundingly the boy began to scream” Mommy, Mommy, Mommy open the door.

For some strange reason, my heart began pounding in my chest quickly and ferociously in a way I have never felt before.

It sounded like the loud banging of hammer trying to attend to a sword being shaped into its

proper form, I became overwhelmed by this sudden emotion.

As I continued to watch the young boy shouting at the door,

he stopped shouting and looked behind him, peering into the darkness as if he could see something my eyes could not.


    0 of 8192 characters used
    Post Comment

    • Isaac White profile image


      5 years ago from Welcome to my beautiful world, where magic is no longer a myth.

      Very Impressive Notez, Very impressive indeed. And of Course. Welcome to the hubpages. I hope to see more of you. Have A nice day. And Yes, I voted up.

      I. White

    • Notez profile imageAUTHOR

      Kash Notez 

      5 years ago from United States

      Thank you so much I've been working on that one for awhile I will place the second chapter up soon, Im so happy you enjoyed it.

    • khmazz profile image

      Kristen Mazzola 

      5 years ago from South Florida

      This was so well written, I really enjoyed it! I'd love to see where it goes, Thanks for sharing :)


    This website uses cookies

    As a user in the EEA, your approval is needed on a few things. To provide a better website experience, uses cookies (and other similar technologies) and may collect, process, and share personal data. Please choose which areas of our service you consent to our doing so.

    For more information on managing or withdrawing consents and how we handle data, visit our Privacy Policy at:

    Show Details
    HubPages Device IDThis is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.
    LoginThis is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.
    Google RecaptchaThis is used to prevent bots and spam. (Privacy Policy)
    AkismetThis is used to detect comment spam. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide data on traffic to our website, all personally identifyable data is anonymized. (Privacy Policy)
    HubPages Traffic PixelThis is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.
    Amazon Web ServicesThis is a cloud services platform that we used to host our service. (Privacy Policy)
    CloudflareThis is a cloud CDN service that we use to efficiently deliver files required for our service to operate such as javascript, cascading style sheets, images, and videos. (Privacy Policy)
    Google Hosted LibrariesJavascript software libraries such as jQuery are loaded at endpoints on the or domains, for performance and efficiency reasons. (Privacy Policy)
    Google Custom SearchThis is feature allows you to search the site. (Privacy Policy)
    Google MapsSome articles have Google Maps embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    Google ChartsThis is used to display charts and graphs on articles and the author center. (Privacy Policy)
    Google AdSense Host APIThis service allows you to sign up for or associate a Google AdSense account with HubPages, so that you can earn money from ads on your articles. No data is shared unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Google YouTubeSome articles have YouTube videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    VimeoSome articles have Vimeo videos embedded in them. (Privacy Policy)
    PaypalThis is used for a registered author who enrolls in the HubPages Earnings program and requests to be paid via PayPal. No data is shared with Paypal unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook LoginYou can use this to streamline signing up for, or signing in to your Hubpages account. No data is shared with Facebook unless you engage with this feature. (Privacy Policy)
    MavenThis supports the Maven widget and search functionality. (Privacy Policy)
    Google AdSenseThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Google DoubleClickGoogle provides ad serving technology and runs an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Index ExchangeThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    SovrnThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Facebook AdsThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Unified Ad MarketplaceThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    AppNexusThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    OpenxThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Rubicon ProjectThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    TripleLiftThis is an ad network. (Privacy Policy)
    Say MediaWe partner with Say Media to deliver ad campaigns on our sites. (Privacy Policy)
    Remarketing PixelsWe may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.
    Conversion Tracking PixelsWe may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.
    Author Google AnalyticsThis is used to provide traffic data and reports to the authors of articles on the HubPages Service. (Privacy Policy)
    ComscoreComScore is a media measurement and analytics company providing marketing data and analytics to enterprises, media and advertising agencies, and publishers. Non-consent will result in ComScore only processing obfuscated personal data. (Privacy Policy)
    Amazon Tracking PixelSome articles display amazon products as part of the Amazon Affiliate program, this pixel provides traffic statistics for those products (Privacy Policy)