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moon seed

Updated on October 6, 2011


The smoke hovered away from her

like a ghost

as she exhaled into the night sky.

She knelt down

and dug up some earth

laying down her deepest secrets

for no one to find.

Surely the rain must have gone to her head

or to the darkest part of her heart.

Either way,

she felt more whole without the burden

than she had ever felt before.


Screaming without making a sound..


she buried with the secret a seed

to grow into a tree

absorbing her pain as it grew

and flowering the fruit of her truths

nurtured by the moonlight

and feeding off of tears.


It would one day

grow into something beautiful

and kiss deeper parts of her

that she never knew were there.

Oh to be a tree

rooted and powerful

helpless and beautiful

outstretched arms and rooted soul

wisdom of the old

and beauty of new

this is how the darken forrest deep within her was born.




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      sligobay 5 years ago from east of the equator

      "Oh Great Spirit, whose voice I hear in the wind..." is the beginning of a great prayer contained in your meditation video. Your poem melds the natural with the supernatural. Great Hub. Thank you.

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      isn't that a great feeling, umbrella?

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Wow colin and johnny, thank you so much. im am especially proud of this one because it is one that instead of me having created it, its almost as if i remembered it.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...man oh man - and that too - lol = it dosen't get any better than this Steph - the Johnny and Colin Show!!!!

      lake erie time 11:48pm

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      Johnnny 6 years ago

      How did I miss this? Lovely indeed your image of the soul within a tree. Or is it the tree within the soul of a woman or man? So much said in your words. Leave it to me to question everything. Very beautiful Steph.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      .....well my dear Steph Shakespeare when you get into that 'zone' you can write with the best of them - truly a transcendental work!

      lake erie time 10:43pm

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      Nicole Canfield 6 years ago from the Ether

      Wow. So gorgeous. I want to be a tree too...always have. :)

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      Justin W Price 6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      ya. I'm already very clumsy!

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      hey thanks, be careful though, sometimes when stumble...we fall.

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      Justin W Price 6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Very nice. Glad I stumbled upon you. Powerful stuff. Voted up!

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thank you lola, thank you!

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      Lola1929 6 years ago from Oregon

      Love Moon Seed... beautiful

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      PINK,

      VERY GROOVY peaceful and transcendental-

      look up "ghost dance" by cusco- listen on youtube...

      its good

      TH

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      mikielikie 6 years ago from Texas

      "oh to be a tree" ... thats a cool thought. you are such a wonderful writer. Like always...Great hub!

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      really liked this one. I like the idea behind it, to bury secrets and plant a tree over them. and it takes away the burden and pain of it. magical and majestic just like the beautiful oak tree that will grow from it.

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks dudes.

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      lyns 6 years ago from USA

      Very nice poem enjoy it, I graded accordingly, have a great day

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      Cousin Fudd 6 years ago

      Great writing and so emotionally intense.