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Mothers request

Updated on June 1, 2016

(Inspired by poem from K.S. Narsimhaswamy, kannada poet & the video song of Movie Amar Prem)


The entry to the world is murky,
the exit will sure be muddy,

o my dear ! eye candy,
for you my eyes are, a boundary,
of love 'n' care, motherly.

sunny, will you be here,
or, leave this boundary forever,
now that i'm grey haired ?

Audio: poetry from K.S.Narasimhaswamy

© 2016 Hari Prasad S

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      Hari Prasad S 7 weeks ago from Bangalore

      Wow. Thanks Roopa, for your overwhelming appreciation. You are right, words fall short to express what a mother is.

      - hari

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      Roopa Prasad 8 weeks ago

      Beautiful ! Words are never enough to express what a mother is! These few lines have conveyed such a strong msg Hari! Hats off to you!

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      Surabhi Kaura 14 months ago

      Interesting poem, Hari Bhaiya. Kannada poets are great inspiration, I think. Good job!

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you shyron, i am blessed by your visit :-). You are absolutely right. Nice lines too.

      - hari

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      Shyron E Shenko 18 months ago from Texas

      Hari, beautiful.

      A mother's love is where it all begins

      From the teaching

      To avoid all sin

      So we can live and love until the end

      Blessings Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you Devika. You are right. The anxiety will still prevail.

      - hari

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      Devika Primić 18 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A mother's love will always be special no matter how much the distance between mother and child. Nice one!

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you for visit perspycacious. You are right.

      - hari

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      Demas W Jasper 18 months ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      Raise them properly and their love will last for eternity.

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks for the visit and comments. Yes. old age also has its own anxieties and concerns.

      - Hari

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      Missy Smith 18 months ago from Florida

      I think Manatita is right. I feel this is a poem about a temporary existence. Being a mother myself, I identify with a mother's love toward her children and what it feels like getting older, closer to the end. Nice poem.

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you shaloo.

      - Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you vishnu sir. None can replace her.

      - hari

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      Shaloo Walia 18 months ago

      A beautiful tribute to mothers!

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      Vishnu 18 months ago

      Mothers love has no equivalence.

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you Manatita. You are right.

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you ruby. Lol

      - hari

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      manatita44 18 months ago from london

      Interesting one. All is temporary; ephemeral. Perhaps this is the message. Hari Om!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 18 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Ah, this is beautiful. A mother's love never ends. Sharing..