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My Life Story Part-2

Updated on December 13, 2013

Everything is fine
But I am not

I am very cool
But climate is hot

Sometime happy
Sometime sad

Sometime good
Sometime bad

People like to say
That go to hell

But i am used to think
everything is well

One day i felt
Is there anything wrong

Am I doing right
To keep this alog

Not able to decide
That what was wrong

So left that thing
and start singing a song

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      MyValentine 7 years ago

      Your sadness is felt, but I like that you continue to sing. We do write our own life song:) Great job!

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      Pooja Sharma 7 years ago from Delhi

      Thanks for your deep analysis

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      manomoney 7 years ago

      its nice for soul searchers it shows that ur looking for something nice in life write some more

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      Pooja Sharma 7 years ago from Delhi

      ok i will try to do that

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      ShallyD 7 years ago from USA

      no way this one is also good.....all u have to do is just elaborate more...

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      Pooja Sharma 7 years ago from Delhi

      Thanks for encouragement shally but i think this one is not that much good.

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      ShallyD 7 years ago from USA

      hey !!!....finally u write your second poem.

      great start and great going. I like your poem keep writing waiting for the sequel of "my life story"