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my painted face

Updated on March 11, 2011

Somewhere

 between ecstasy and exhaustion

i lie here

and breathe

still feeling champagne like bubbles

running through my veins

skin

so sensitive to the touch

it felt like falling up

into a black sphere

surrounded by light

like a solar eclipse

my painted face

pleasure smeared

moistened skin

and chest of heave breath

feeling high

and completely aware

the aftermath of body shock

so confusing at first

yes or no

stay or go

and the realizing

with every taste...i wanted more

a hunger that almost hurt

broken rules and bended knees

a sudden freedom burst

almost too much at once

and now

i lie here

heavy chested breaths

completely satisfied

emotion rushing in

recalling succulent mouthfuls

of your kiss

never feeling more natural

more beautiful

more vibrant

more complete

i bathe now

in the afterglow.

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      ahhh the after sex afterglow.. NICE! hmm sounds like you had a good time! either your one lucky lady, or hes one lucky man. good poem in expressing that feeling of utter satisfaction and exstacy.

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thank you Awful Poet, it always catches me offguard to get such a comment from one of the great hubbers.

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      This is a fantastic piece, Glad to be a fan.

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      astra- now what a delicious compliment! That you love poems like mine, and want to wallpaper the world with them. hand to my heart, that made my day. The fact that i am in league with poems youd love to see everywhere. Thank you.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Sweet and delicious, that's how this is written. I love poems like this. Want to wallpaper the world with them...

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      ChristineVianello 6 years ago from Philadelphia

      I voted up, nice poem

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      Pink,

      i have never heard anyone describe eating a bowl of ice cream like that before!!!! *tee-hee* well done and stuff

      TH

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanks randy behavior! yea, that was the best way i could describe those deep kisses. :)

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      Randy Behavior 6 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Well that was YUMMY! This poem leaves me grinning.

      "succulent mouthfuls

      of your kiss"

      Indeed. :)

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      the pink umbrella 6 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thanx ben! sexy urself!

      misha- oh you wish you saw my smeared face!!!!

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      Misha 6 years ago from DC Area

      where is the pic of your painted face? ;)

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Afterglows are nice. Good write. Sexy and pretty.

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