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Updated on March 27, 2013

Our hearts will dry like flowers in a desert



If this should be,


Than a moment in black and white



And every thing lost all sense of being,in an overwhelming desperation

If we keep living in fear



Die without knowing what really feeling love is


our existence is nothing more


In which there is no colors; leading to an unknown feeling about our future



and a painful scar that is our past


Should I further love you,



Should I feel like I do









Lost in my loneliness sea



Lost in this dreams 




Grabbing me by my neck and suffocating me at nights


                I guess i further have to change the world


Taking me to a place full of nothing



To make you see me



To be your one

Like a peace of paper that you tore
    
        Can't paste it any more

But still you needed to see your mess


  I can't figure out what's next

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      Beth100 7 years ago from Canada

      Ah, soooo beautiful! I love it, Motricio!

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      tantrum 7 years ago from Tropic of Capricorn

      This is beautiful !!!! Amazing, motricio! You're a very good poet! you should write more poetry . thank you !!!! :)

      And delete the spam above me. It's not good for your hub !

      Press deny forever

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      Thnx,

      I only write poetry when my heart is blue.

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      Krishna 7 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Nice poem

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      Jess Killmenow 7 years ago from Nowheresville, Eastern United States

      I love the way you use your line structure. Beautiful. Thank you

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      Thanks itech and Jess, for stopping by.

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      sunbrite 7 years ago from USA

      What a beautiful poem, I so much enjoyed reading it.

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      Sunbrite I see you like my writings!

      Thank you for reading, I'll follow you too.

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      mega1 7 years ago

      I am going to copy this and translate it to Spanish just to see how beautiful your words will be that way - You are a sensitive soul, I love reading your poetry!

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      -Hi mega

      I'm going to send to you the original, is in spanish

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Courage is resistance to fear, mastery of fear not absence of fear. I admire your courage to write such a piece of honesty beautifully written when your heart is blue. Try it sometime when your heart is singing a kaleidescope of wonderment of soaring heights of the human spirit loftily lifted by tempestuous joy. Wonderful stuff.

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      Mauricio Rodriguez 7 years ago from Bogota DC, Colombia

      I was reading your words this morning Ralwus, I felt so touched that I was about to cry. But as you say, my courage is bigger and I keep mastering my fears. In this way I wouldn't be so blue. And yes,

      I want to sing a kaleidescope. =)

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      ralwus 7 years ago

      Gee, it seems I am always causing someone to cry. LOL You shall sing my son for you are not done. HE is still working on you.

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      Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

      What a beautiful poem, very deeply felt...

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      Ashantina 6 years ago

      Deep.

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      Ancillotti 6 years ago from Brasil, Vitoria - ES

      Beautiful! Thanks for this excellent hub!

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