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My Life- A Poem

Updated on November 13, 2015

So many words remain unsaid,

So many words are left unheard;

So much of life is left unseen

And yet, my vision is already blurred.



So many miles are left to walk,

So much of work is yet to be done;

Exhausted, bruised, battered I am-

Life seems to have only begun!


© 2015 Shubhro Sen

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thanks and will do so.

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      Reynold Jay 22 months ago from Saginaw, Michigan

      Lots of thought in so few words. Well done. I do see a picture appearing twice. It is easy to delete one of them in the editing mode. Well done.

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thanks Devika and Mel.

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      Mel Carriere 22 months ago from San Diego California

      Delightful words, full of emotion.

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      Devika Primić 22 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Gorgeous photos!

      I enjoyed reading. The photos stand out!

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thanks Vasantha.

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      Sakshi Davessar 22 months ago from Punjab, India

      Most welcome:)

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      vasantha T k 22 months ago from Bangalore

      A short and lovely poem.

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thanks a ton.

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      Sakshi Davessar 22 months ago from Punjab, India

      Lovely poem with a great hidden meaning too. Very well said.

      I liked the rhyming too

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thank you.

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      stella vadakin 22 months ago from 3460NW 50 St Bell, Fl32619

      Hi, great short poem, I like it.

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thanks Hari . All the best for your licensing exam Surabhi.

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      Surabhi Kaura 22 months ago

      Well, Shubhro - In reply I would say, it's a privilege to learn from you as well. Keep it up. Will catch up after 2 months... have to prepare for licensing exam.

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      Hari Prasad S 22 months ago from Bangalore

      Shubro,

      Few poems are timeless,

      so is yours.

      - Hari

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thanks Hari and Surabhi.

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      Surabhi Kaura 22 months ago

      Hari, that's my favourite :)

      Kaanton pe chal ke milenge saaye bahaar ke... maza aa gaya. Kya mehfil lagi hai. Wah! Cheers!

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      Hari Prasad S 22 months ago from Bangalore

      Simply superb.

      I remember gulzaars song.

      Ruk Jana nahi, tu Kahin haar ke...

      - hari

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thank you, just trying to learn from you.

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      Surabhi Kaura 22 months ago

      Kya khoob kaha! Hats off.

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thank you Dana and Ms Dora.

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 22 months ago from The Caribbean

      I've been there and I know the feeling. Thanks for putting it into words so effectively.

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      Dana Tate 22 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Beautifully expressed and so true in just a few words. I loved it and also the photo's well done!

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      Shubhro Sen 22 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Thank you.

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      A lot there in a short poem. So discerning; so wise; such depth! Hari Om Tat Sat!