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nodding off on you

Updated on April 30, 2012

if i fell asleep on you...

its because i needed to feel your touch

you have no idea how hard it is

to fall asleep without the heat of you

and the smell of your white t shirt.

knowing that if i wake durring the night

your arm will be around me

and your breathing will be deep

and i can just sink in closer to you

and fall asleep again.

surrounded by billowy blankets

fresh breeze comming in from outside

and the promise at 3 am...

that i have five more hours

of this.



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    • the pink umbrella profile image
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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      thank u running deer, ur comment made me smile today

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      RunningDeer 5 years ago from Iowa

      Very relatable. I enjoyed this poem. You captured the idea of the safety and comfort of knowing someone is there. Thank you for sharing! Voted up and beautiful.

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      singhrakeshs 5 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      beautiful poem i love this. such a great feeling to wake up in morning. You always doing lovely work.

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      i try to always encorporate music and pictures with my writing. gives you more insight into how i feel about what im writing.

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      Voronwe 5 years ago

      Beautiful expression and emotions here! The music is great as well...

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      your comments compliment me at just the right moment.

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      Passionate romantic writing the pink umbrella. You always have lovely work. Beautiful poem. Voted up, beautiful, and awesome :)

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      im just glad someone out there is tingleing lol. thanx max

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      What a sensual beauty, I love it how you tell these images so vivid and alluring, tingles all the right places... Really really beautiful!

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      the pink umbrella 5 years ago from the darkened forest deep within me.

      Your a great writer, your compliments mean alot.

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      such a great feeling to wake up next to someone, it sucks when you have to get up in the morning when you just want to stay there all day with him. Beautiful poem.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Ahhh. this made me more sad..it brings me to somewhere and sometime..and someday...

      This is so moving..can relate with this..

      Hope your find Pinks..someday just be patient ,you'll have that warmth again in your side and arms. Take Care !

      The music video makes my eyes teary..

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      EaglesSoar11 5 years ago

      This was nice, thanks for sharing.

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      CM Sullivan 5 years ago from California

      As I read this I got a feeling of complete relaxation and could just feel that awesome feeling of waking up, the person you love right next to you, everything dark and beautifully quiet, and the knowing you are going to get to sink back into blissfulness for hours to come. Awesome, Up, and beautiful girl.

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      lisa42 5 years ago from Sacramento

      I think many people can relate to the feelings you evoke here. Love it!

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      Jim Higgins 5 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      A really great poem of love that peaceful closeness that i brings deep in the night.